The second roar was even more monstrous than the first, making the ground shake and everypony's hearts pound. In the rush of the whole incident John was checking his weapons and ammo. Storm rifle showed to be at 68% charge, enough to help with another bear if that was the case. The case was settled when John came face to face with the largest living thing he has ever seen, another bear over twice the size of the last bear. Trying to help John Twilight screamed: "John get out of its, it's an ursa major!"
John was standing still staring at the new crimson colored enemy. The major looked at the dead body of it's offspring and roared in defiance and agony over losing its loved one. The roar was so loud in fact that even Celestia herself heard the menacing cry over the entire distance. When the ursa was finished bellowing it turned to John and gave him the "You're gonna fucking die," look. John took that as a compliment, the blue ursa was no easy task to take down. John felt however that he was at an extreme disadvantage compared to the older ursa because the ursa major was magnitudes larger than the thirty foot tall beast that lay dead. John looked at the pelican and back at the ursa. John put his new quickly thought out plan to action with an order. "Distract this thing I have an idea!"
"Are y'all crazy! It'l tear us to pieces!" A shocked Applejack responded.
"Just do it!" John commanded.
Applejack and the others fallowed his demands and started to gain the attention of the ursa major. While they were distracting the mega-beast John was running for the pelican cockpit. Instead of flying the ship, he decided to use the top mounted turret, a new feature since he was last out of cryo. The new model of the UNSC battle pelican came with a pilot operated machine gun and spartan anti-vehicle laser. The side man-operated cannons took after the falcon battle aircraft from the Invasion of Reach. And the top turret was the infamous scorpion tank main turret. With this weaponry available to him, John would have an easier time taking out the ursa major. When he reached the cockpit John jumped into the upper seat which controlled the top cannon. With precise aim he readied the shot and let loose a 90mm explosive round into the ursa's head. When the smoke cleared all that could be seen of the major's head was the side that John didn't shoot. With a sound as loud as thunder the gargantuan beast came tumbling down onto the ground. 'Why didn't I do this before?' he thought. He unhitched the cockpit and jumped out, greeted by five ponies. Fluttershy had passed out and laid on the ground where they were safe from the ursas earlier.
"John, how did you kill an ursa major?!" a shocked Twilight burst out.
"It was what I was trained to do."
"Dear why did you though? Twilight could have done what she did to the last one that arrived in Ponyville a while back." Right as Rarity stopped talking a large white flash appeared out of nowhere and blinded all but John. When the flash dissipated an enraged Celestia and Shining Armor along with his fairly new wife, Cadence, were trotting towards John.
"John do care to explain yourself here!" Celestia barked.
"I saved us from these ursas. Nothing else would have helped us in this situation ma'am."
"We don't kill here John, not the wildlife not the citizens. Do you understand?" Shining cut in.
"What if I don't?" John tested.
"Try me, I dare you." Shining relayed.
"Gentlecolts please calm down. I am sure we can handle this in a civil manner." Rarity but in.
"I would love to start," John replied, "I only did this to save your subjects and your sister. If I didn't they would be morsels for worms. If you don't like it what are you gonna do about it, prissy colt." John had pulled on Shining's last nerve causing the enraged colt to shoot out magical bolts of energy. John easily avoided all of them and continued to taunt. "You can't do anything. You're weak, pathetic, and most of all...worthless." Shining shot another volley of magic at John. More intense than the last. Again they were all avoided easily by him. "Why do you try, has Celestia even told you what I did for a living?" as John kept talking he was now taking action and throwing some punches and kicks in for more of a show. "I am a soldier the best in the galaxy." His fist made contact, cracking a rib or two in Shining's chest. "I have killed more than you can count." Another punch was delivered to Shining's side cracking another couple ribs in the process. "And I can kill you... but I won't." John's last kick made impact with Shining's jaw rendering the Captain 'down for the count'. "Because I don't need to." When John finished his speech he was hit with multiple shots of magic which brought his shields down by about 3%. John turned his head to see Twilight as angry as the ursa major was.
"Why would you do that!" She exclaimed.
"To show you the hell that I and over a hundred others have gone through. You see how easily I was able to break him, I was a child when this shit happened to me and I damn well plan on using my skill and knowledge in the battlefield and off the battlefield to help me when I can." John turned and walked back to the pelican and returned the storm rifle and any other equipment he had on him back to the pelican. When he got out he was surrounded by the six mares who used to call him friend but now called him foe. They all donned special looking jewelry, Twilight's was especially more dazzling than any of the others fancy necklaces. Celestia and Cadence were tending Shining while the mares in front of him were lighting up, as if they were charging.
That escalated quickly.
Oh shit. They going to make him all happy and peaceful.
Came here for tits...
left 5 seconds after posting this comment.
Shits about to go down.
I see what you did with the chapters also LOL twilight can only bring down his shield by 3%. If chief decides to turn evil they are all fucked.
I'd laugh if he pulled off an Armor lock and reflect the beam back at them.
I say chief punches the fucking harmony blast right back into them p.s. media.desura.com/cache/images/groups/1/5/4674/thumb_940x3000/media_httpstaticfunny_mjvub.jpg.scaled1000.jpg change Pandora to equestria.
they are fucked
dis gonna be good
and they will all watch in horror as the elements do absolutely nothing to the master chief because the master chief may be a dangerous killer but he's also the greatest hero to ever exist he saved the entire galaxy from being consumed by the flood or wiped out by the halo rings
Um....Ya this does not look good here...um
Hmmmmmm trying to fight the master cheif with an over powered lazer
sorry girls your fucked
1813632 so true
HOW THE FRICK IS IT INSTA ELEMENTS OF HARMONY!CELESTIA HAD NO BAGGAGE CARRIERS NO BOX WITH HER THE ELEMENTS CLEARLY WERENT ON HER AND SO ON SO FOURTH!!!!!WHAT!!!
Why was Celestia silent the entire time?
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VERSES
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I reserve judgement for what I am going to see.
One of two choices
1) Nothing happens because technically Chief aint evil, he's justly protector
or
2) The elements are a tool of advanced magic that genetically modify the target to force them into 'harmony' which is all just an illusion and they are all subconciously controlled by.....something......
or a highly unlikely
3) Chief armor locks and it bounces back at them and they get stoned *pun intended*
the elements cant do shit to jhon,
1) he is not evil
2) he has the genetical altered code (or some shit like that) that the librarian gave him, he can resist the freaking composer, so i think he can easily resist the elements
Here's some writing tips (copy pasted) from a good writer. They aren't mine.
Misc stuff that pisses me right the fuck off:
They’re = They fucking are.
Their = Shows fucking possession.
There = Specifies a fucking location.
You’re = You fucking are.
Your = Shows fucking possession.
We’re = We fucking are.
Were = Past fucking tense of “are”.
Where = Specifies a fucking location.
Than = A fucking comparison.
Then = A point in fucking time.
Affect = To fucking change something.
Effect = The fucking change in question.
It’s = It fucking is.
Its = Shows fucking possession.
Are = Present fucking tense of “be”.
Our = Shows fucking possession.
Through = In one fucking side and out the other.
Though = In fucking spite of something.
Tough = Fucking hard or difficult.
Alot = Not a word
A lot = Several of something
Allot = Put aside
Cannon = Something you blow shit up with
Canon = What the authors created
First person = I/we/us/our
Second person = you
Third person = He/she/they/their
Must/should/would/could of = something that is wrong and should never be done
Must/should/would/could have = what you really mean
Definitely = something that will happen
Defiantly = refusing to give in
Definatly = not a word. God, how could you butcher it this badly?
No one = not a single person
Noone = Who even does this? Really?
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I fixed the problems, thanks for pointing them out, but I didn't do half the shit in your comment. Why did you post that?
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Common mistakes people make. It's just a future reference thing.
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So they aren't directed towards me?
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The only ones directed to you were the ones you messed up :P
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Thank you!
Sigh...Where do I begin here. First, all of this chapter was nothing short of: "I need to release this real quick so I just unload a horribly rushed piece of literary garbage to make my hungry fans happy." I am sorry to say, but this was really rushed; there was absolutely no build up in the Ursa fight, there was just a convenient plot device installed just to rush things along. Add to that the insta-rage of the Captain of the Guard and acting for no reason like a mere rookie when he is a calm head of the ARMY of Equestria, then the arrogance of the Chief displayed here was completely out of character. He is a calm, collected, calculative individual to the point that whatever he says or does, it has a ricocheting and resounding impact, like an echo in the highest mountain ranges. Further more, WTF is with this convenient plot device of using the Elements of Harmony on John without so much a half-baked explanation as to why?
Friend, you seriously need to spend more time at the idea table before releasing any chapters for ANY story, especially with characters with intensely established personalities; you need to think more carefully about the words and actions of a character of the caliber of Master Chief, as there are established expectations out of such a character being that he has starred in some highly acclaimed games. I know not everyone is an Eric Nylund of writing, and I don't expect TOO much from freelance fanfiction writers, but PLEASE at LEAST make an effort to make Chief REMOTELY sound like Chief, at least THAT much I can ask of ANY Halo fanfic writer.
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You do know there is a tank turret on top of the Halo 4 pelican right? And further more, everything will be explained in due time my friend, there is no need to rant on about this. I already to this into account and have done all this on purpose. Just be patient. I am not mad at your comment because you are entitled to your opinion, but just keep reading and you will understand.
1815729 Ima firein mah lazar?
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I'm hoping that chief just reflects the beam away in a badass way
1823339 RED vs BLUE for the win! Caboose is best Spartan.
1825572 and Theta is best colt