The world of Equestria has always had Celestia's kindness, this story is about one pony who decides to show her just how much she means.
The world of Equestria has always had Celestia's kindness, this story is about one pony who decides to show her just how much she means.
... Sooo... the whole point of this story was that Twilight wanted to say 'thank you'? That's not a story. That's just weak
109671 its not the full story i wanted to right a short first chapter so i wasnt wasting everyones time, i have more planned if people want me to continue
Give a summary, use proper grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and flow.
I'm only guessing you didn't do any of that from the story's front page; face value means a lot :L