Incest?
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(Didn't thumb down, though; that'd be unfair.) Well, time to actually read it now and make a decision.

I'll wait till this is completed. Then I'll read. Give auto upvote based on characters and being a clopfic.

Hmmm... I hope I don't regret anything

i don't know either to like and read next one or just walk away cuz i don't dislike anything O.o

1536209 It's your choice. I'm not forcing you to read it.

1536218 i know lol i read it just thinking cuz i don't know if i would like and read next one or just leave it (as i said i don't dislike anything) unless it breaks the rules ofc)

Well I don't regret anything! I'm not a huge fan of incest but I don't like it either. So I guess I'm in between the hate and the like. A little bit leaning to the 'like' side I guess. I don't know if this was just a quick pop out in your mind, but I really like it. I don't really read much M-Rated stories but this is an exception. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
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And a random gif for you, I think I like the relationship between Applejack x Big Mac now x-x

i cant wait to see how this turns out. the last macxapplejack i read was kinda strange.javascript:smilie('');

"bucking around, even though that’s exactly what she wanted, was to buck around."

This line, dear sir, is one of the greatest lines I have ever read in my life.

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1536643 Oh, thanks kind sir.

1536684 Hehe.

Southerners inbreeding? Who'da thought?
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Incest?

Oh well, I'll still read it and see.

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1537089 Oh I though you were saying southeners always insect but now I know what you meant. Also hello .

1537117 Just poking at a typical stereotype.
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Okay, this really needs some TLC. You could do with some 'show, don't tell'. Half of the fun of reading these types of fics is the buildup, the wordplay and explaining things. This has none of that. Its just applejack being ridiculously out of character. No support shown for Big Mac's descriptions or decisions. I'm sorry, but this isn't quality stuff, even for clop.

"You’re being way too perverted now, and I disapprove!"

If I had a nickle for every time I heard that.
Seriously though, this story is off to a promising start. I'm excited to see where you take it!

Incest, you say? I'm on board.

Bee-bop-ba-dada-doe-bop-ba-dada-doe
Skibba-dabba-dee

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Incest, eh?

I'll follow you!

I don't approve of incest at all... But when you're dealing with fictional characters... Eh, as long as it's fairly well written, I'm willing to put aside my moral disapproval. I still think that Mac gave in a little too quickly. To mentally overcome moral taboos such as these takes time. Lots of time. And in most cases, drugs and/or alcohol is usually involved.

Yes, alcohol. Needs more alcohol.

WHOA! That is one big Applejack there in the comments section! I like it!

Its alright I guess. A little too quick for my tastes and I prefer the characters to stay more in character. There needs to be something that motivates Applejack to make her move. Has she always felt this way? Why now? Ultimately, as long as they get some good long, sensual, WELL-WRITTEN fucking in, that's the important part. It is clop after all, so lets not be too serious here. More grammer and spelling errors than I like to see in stories. Give your next chapter a better proofing job before submitting... or is that Art's fault? hhmmmm.....

Sorry, but i have to downvote on this just based on principle. INcest will always be a major no-no with me.

Please don't hate me. =(

Always a good fan of wincest. Good job! :3

1540653 Why didn't you just ignore it if you don't like it?

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Really?

I won't comment on what I think of the story, but you should always read something before you vote up or down.

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I upvote all clop because, to me, it always gets thumbs up after I read. To me, no clop is bed clop. I am very...perverted? No....easily turned on. Aren't all 14 year olds turned on easily?

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Still, your upvote isn't really legitimate unless you've actually read the story you're upvoting. I'm sure the authors on the site would appreciate being able to know that each upvote means that their story was actually appreciated by someone who read it. The same rule applies to automatic downvotes.

I'm shutting up now. Enjoy your porn.

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I always do. In fact, I'm about to read it.

Good job Scatman, got a boner and there wasn't even any real sex yet. I give you a a a a and a

I just don't like it... I really can't give a good reason, but I'm just not into it. Sorry man :/

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So... I don't make a habit of reading porn stories, but I figured I should read and comment on the story, since I've already commented, and I have to say, this isn't so bad for what it is. You've got some grammatical problems, but not so many that it threw me off while reading. I can PM you a list of them so I don't take up too much space here pointing out each one and their respective fixes. Alternatively, I'd be more than happy to go through it and edit it for you.

While I know that this is a porn story and you want to get to the action as soon as possible, you have a good opportunity to examine some of the emotional states that accompany such an unusual relationship. Being a traditional sort of pony, I would expect Big Mac to be more resistant to the idea at first, wanting to understand why AJ suddenly feels this way about him. He'd also likely want to know what kind of relationship she's looking for here before he can come to a decision: whether she's looking to change their relationship into a full-blown romance or simply wants to be "siblings with benefits." Including this would make the interactions feel more realistic, and therefore more engaging to your readers, both those in it for the porn and those in it for the story.

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My reaction exactly. I'm sorry. I didn't downvote, but I'm very anti-incest. Does that make me prejudiced?

1552248 No. That makes you normal.

Incest is wincest

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Relevant.

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Honestly dude. It's been a while. HURRY UP!

moar. nao.

Next chapter please! D:

1590850>>1591096>>1601522 Lol, just a little bit, please. I'm not that big on writing, and to be honest, I'm... uhh... KINDA NEW! Okay, give me a week, and I'll see what I can do. It's about half way done now, so this shouldn't be too hard... Right?!

1631309 I understand. Procrastination and laziness. Gets the better of all of us sometimes, especially me. heh. no worries

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moar please

I really wish they had kept the star system. I don't like the all or nothing thumbs. So far I'd give it a 3.5 out of 5. The characterization isn't entirely accurate to the show, and the pacing seems a bit rushed, but not bad. It's hard to say that anything sexual is accurate to the show's characterization, but regardless it just seems a bit to brash for AJ, and she's sayin' stuff that seems a bit too far out of character. Mostly the comment about him being a dick. Big Mac also seems like he'd be more resistant than that. He's strong, and strong willed. The story itself is fun, and funny, but the characterization is just a bit off. Solid 3.5 out of 5.

This is good. Its funny and cheeky, I'm sure we all have fondled someone under the table before, I know I have.