This whole damn story just gives me so many feels, it's like some sort of addictive emotional roller coaster. Awesome work, just don't make us wait quite so long for the next chapter.
dude idea pich here in the middle of the battle Celstia shows as the dudes dying in battle armor blown the shit out everything then they have make up sex dude so what you think
I want to read it, but I have had bad luck with second person fics... even the high rated ones never felt good to me. I'm going to try it, and if I like it consider yourself a god at writing because I have yet to read one I like.
Hmmm…Oh I have a prediction, they won but there is a casualty and they don't find him (you). Ceslestia is heart broken until Luna tell (you) are still alive because she still can visit your dreams. A couple days laters its discover you are being held hostage, and give an ultimatum to Celestia of give up the elements of exchange of your safe return, and that unless she want to recover (you) on pieces starting with the head, she will deliver ALL the elements
I found it surprising that he didn't try to write Celestia. Did he have little dating experience back on Earth? It's been a long time, and I can't remember the details of the earliest chapters, aside from his relationship with Celestia.
Great story btw! I fully support his going to was like he was trained to do, in spite of Celestia.
Good stuff. Great chapter. The whole chapter kept reminding me of Skyrim. Guess it was just the whole setup that did it. And don't worry about being rusty. Everyone that's been out of it needs to get back into the rhythm of things.
I know I'm in the minority here, but I don't like the war. The story is good, well written and deserves all the praise its getting. It just seems that every HiE story has them going to war at some point, and I get so emotionally invested in the side characters, especially in great stories like this one, that I get really depressed reading it. I read these stories for fun and to brighten my day and a civil war like this doesn't sit well with me.
I hope that after the war the story goes back to slice of life and drama about the human dating Celestia and the effects it has on the couple, their friends/families, and the nobles and citizens of Equestria. There must be some good inter species debate going on when the ruler is going outside her species.
Anyway, that's all personal preference. I just needed to get that off my chest. Great story, glad to have you back. Keep up the good work.
2570990 I agree with this. I like that something interesting is happening with the characters other than the simple waifu-ing earlier, but it was a very strong SoL fic. It didn't need to go to all out war to stay good. Sometimes bigger isn't better. I hate to say it but war has become a cliche.
2575239 You know though I do agree with you to a point, war was really the only logically conclusion to gowith in this story since he made the main a member of the army. Having him do nothing but drills and rising through the ranks would do nothing but get horribly stale. Not to mention in order to make the relationship stronger between the two he needed the basis of a good fight and I personally can't think of a better basis for a fight.....though wars really are getting overdone. At least not everyone does it thankfully.
What didn't make sense is why they didn't just collapse the path through the mountain, and build up defenses on Canterlot, especially with the human's much advanced knowledge of technology.
2591896 You don't exactly want to give the enemy ground like that. Alamo-ing at Canterlot would forfeit literally everything else. They would also be trapped there which would be very easy to lay siege to. Also, that pass is an important route considering it cuts off travel time around the mountain a lot. Collapsing it would destroy an important strategic point.
Hope to see more!
I imagine Griff has a smarmy English accent. Sort of like Murdoc from the Gorillaz.
Must you torment us so with that little 'gossip' part.
This whole damn story just gives me so many feels, it's like some sort of addictive emotional roller coaster. Awesome work, just don't make us wait quite so long for the next chapter.
An update I love you.
You tried to be sneaky updating really late but I'm on to you.
Calling it now; they win the battle, but find out that there was someone else egging the other side on.
He gets wounded or scarred during the battle, which causes one hell of a reaction from Celestia.
» Mike
So at first I was like "Yay update!"
Then I read it and now I'm like "Boo waiting"
Will we get to see something from Celestias side?
for some reason i hope the main character ends up in griffonia at the end of the war instead of equestria, it would make for a nice twist
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
I love this story too much... Please update!!!
Sweet Jesus... I forgot this story existed
He should come back with a wicked battle scar. For what reason? to look Badass that what!!
such an awesome chapter but hopefully there won't be a long wait until the next one
For some reason I really hope this story will have an incredibly sad ending.
Anyways, it is great to see an update! I had to go back and reread the previous part so I could keep up.
Awsome as Always, i can't wait to see what will happen next!
Good stuff as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Fantastic as usual, dude. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Fuck that.
2556925 Well, we are dealing with a human. Humans don't always get happy endings..
Yes....it is! *Thumbs up*
great chapter
I hope your updating this more regularly though..
I wonder if its bad that I wish for him to develop some new power and return to Canterlot, with a new sword or something like that?
You wouldn't by any chance be drawing up parallels to the American Civil War now would you?
Oooh boy, this next chapter is going to be rough.
Good chapter.Just hope that 'you' and Celestia get back together eventually.
I am just loving this story. I really hope the whole celestia being some other guy isn't true because I will literally make me sick and very sad.
dude idea pich here in the middle of the battle Celstia shows as the dudes dying in battle armor blown the shit out everything then they have make up sex dude so what you think
Okay so Equestria has Griffins, Zebras, and Minotaurs fighting with them? Damn these Destrierians are screwed.
The days that this story updates are good days. I do hope I make it through the coming melee.
I want to read it, but I have had bad luck with second person fics... even the high rated ones never felt good to me. I'm going to try it, and if I like it consider yourself a god at writing because I have yet to read one I like.
This pleases me, now, do it again.
Hmmm…Oh I have a prediction, they won but there is a casualty and they don't find him (you). Ceslestia is heart broken until Luna tell (you) are still alive because she still can visit your dreams. A couple days laters its discover you are being held hostage, and give an ultimatum to Celestia of give up the elements of exchange of your safe return, and that unless she want to recover (you) on pieces starting with the head, she will deliver ALL the elements
2555812 this is me right now.
I found it surprising that he didn't try to write Celestia. Did he have little dating experience back on Earth? It's been a long time, and I can't remember the details of the earliest chapters, aside from his relationship with Celestia.
Great story btw! I fully support his going to was like he was trained to do, in spite of Celestia.
Good stuff. Great chapter.
The whole chapter kept reminding me of Skyrim. Guess it was just the whole setup that did it.
And don't worry about being rusty. Everyone that's been out of it needs to get back into the rhythm of things.
Griff reminds me of Augustus "COLE TRAIN" Cole from Gears of War.
Griff reminds me of Griff from Red vs. Blue
I can't wait for the fight, this story is outstanding.
What the f man. I didn't want to feel these feels... Yes I did... Its why I'm reading... Why do I do this to myself
I know I'm in the minority here, but I don't like the war. The story is good, well written and deserves all the praise its getting. It just seems that every HiE story has them going to war at some point, and I get so emotionally invested in the side characters, especially in great stories like this one, that I get really depressed reading it. I read these stories for fun and to brighten my day and a civil war like this doesn't sit well with me.
I hope that after the war the story goes back to slice of life and drama about the human dating Celestia and the effects it has on the couple, their friends/families, and the nobles and citizens of Equestria. There must be some good inter species debate going on when the ruler is going outside her species.
Anyway, that's all personal preference. I just needed to get that off my chest. Great story, glad to have you back. Keep up the good work.
I just hope that Celestia and I can stay together she is so cool.
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...please?
2570990
I agree with this. I like that something interesting is happening with the characters other than the simple waifu-ing earlier, but it was a very strong SoL fic. It didn't need to go to all out war to stay good. Sometimes bigger isn't better. I hate to say it but war has become a cliche.
2575239
You know though I do agree with you to a point, war was really the only logically conclusion to gowith in this story since he made the main a member of the army. Having him do nothing but drills and rising through the ranks would do nothing but get horribly stale. Not to mention in order to make the relationship stronger between the two he needed the basis of a good fight and I personally can't think of a better basis for a fight.....though wars really are getting overdone. At least not everyone does it thankfully.
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Yeah there's always a point of no return where you're too far into development to change the course.
fuck... my curiousity is over 9000!!!
What didn't make sense is why they didn't just collapse the path through the mountain, and build up defenses on Canterlot, especially with the human's much advanced knowledge of technology.
2591896
You don't exactly want to give the enemy ground like that. Alamo-ing at Canterlot would forfeit literally everything else. They would also be trapped there which would be very easy to lay siege to. Also, that pass is an important route considering it cuts off travel time around the mountain a lot. Collapsing it would destroy an important strategic point.