Nice lovely chapter here, and a merry Christmas and Happy Holidays and New Years, and anything else I might've missed to you.
Chapters like these are always heartwarming to read even though there really is nothing going on in them. Thanks for this second chapter in a second day, and looking forward to the next one whenever you put it up.
It was a very touch gesture to make everybody in the family had a bonding moment, and nice way to end Christmas, and now as you promise, next chapter will have more action and adventure, right?
Oh man, I can't wait, I bet the meeting was a clue of what it will happen latter, maybe some enemies to the crow, will kidnap (X), it make sense, that way they have a barraging chip in case their plans, go wrong, and boy did Celestia…what I saying, the 3 goddess, will have there heads on a stick if they ever make the minus of harm to (X), and there will no place in hell compare to there wrath if they make some serious damage: Like cut off one arm, or both his eyes.
Nettles to say, shit is going to get down, pretty soon
*Sees update* Ooooooh, I wonder which of my favorites updated this time... *Sees 'This Magic Moment' at the top* That can't be right, it only updated the other day... MFW a Christmas update on Christmas: mimg.ugo.com/201001/35175/last-house-on-the-left.jpg Good chapter.
Mr. Rater, Oopsy My Bad. I meant the end of the ribcage relative to your stomach. Ponies are short. I'm not the best at explaining things. Please don't hate me! I'm so sorry! Proud member of the Confederate States of America, ScatMan
Now that that is taken care of I can say how much I adore this story. Please continue this. Would have articulated this more but I'm away from my computer and got a notification on my phone--so I just had to read it.
You know, when I first started reading this, I found myself thinking that this was another gorram Gary Stu in Equestria fic. I was mistaken.
What you have here is very cleverly written and of good, solid quality and I'm glad I found it. Solid plotting, decent grammar and spelling, plus or minus a few small things here or there, and while some of the characters seem a bit OOC (like Celestia) her personality is consistent nonetheless and doesn't jar me from the story's flow. Well done, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, naming Mace's wife Morning Star? Brings a whole new meaning to the term 'Ol Ball and Chain. Well played.
Sir Lightingace, I apologize for my extended absence. I can't say I've been busy, because I really haven't. I've been tremendously lazy. However, my exams officially ended today, so I will be spending my free time writing, once again. I can't say when the next chapter shall arrive, because I have no idea. I'm not finished it yet. I know what I want to write, but, for whatever reason, it's difficult for me to write. I don't know. I'm trying, though. Last weeks episode kinda messed me up a bit, too, so I have to go back and edit or delete a couple of my jokes. Which sucks cause I thought they were funny. Oh well. With undying love, ScatMan
2017705 don't worry my good sir, I was merely concern about your well being and the reason of why why haven't hear about you for some time. By all mean, take all the time you see fit to require to finish the chapter and don't rush yourself if you feel tired. I understand your situation, that episode still confuse me, as to why Celestia make some decision, to her swear enemy. I fear a storm cloud is approaching upon us my friend and such danger has force her to take extreme measures, and a being stronger than Discord is putting me, very nervous.
Mr. Craig589, (me shrugging) I wouldn't know. The only HiE fic I've read is Sophistication and Betrayal, and he was a construction worker. I suppose I thought I was being creative. Oh well. Live long and prosper, ScatMan
This fanfic, it is a must read for all bronies who's waifu is Celestia. Its so varied in the tastes that it puts to the table it may be considered one of my favorite fanfics. There is a perfect balance between clop, and romance. I see only one problem, 'I' am one cynical fuck. I mean how unstable in the head do you have to be to hate stairs, or bully poor Prince Blueblood, just let him be a dick, don't be one by maliciously pranking him. So yes, wonderful story, excited about ch7.
You seem to be hinting at some really good/possible story arcs... one is Celestia's concern for "me" and how she can get overprotective... I feel like this is something that you're kinda gently pushing this one rather than jumping right in and I'm kinda fine with that... but I'd like to see it start moving forward a bit more.
And then the next bit is "me" getting depressed about my family. I feel like it would be something that would plague "me" every now and again but I feel like I'd also have a moment when it's REALLY depressing... and I'd need some help getting through it. You could be planning this, maybe in the flashback bit, but I still feel like it's something you could explore.
"You’re just not a big fan of ponies using your marefriends’ name in vain." Now I'm no author, or proofreader, but isn't it supposed to be "marefriend's"? Marefriends' makes it sound plural to me. Otherwise, it's March, and I am reading this, FTW. Excellent chapter, as always, and I am about to read chapter 7. also, nice socks
3895808 70% of my body is made of movies and video games (That... sounded healthier when Kojima said it.)... And I've yet to hear of a movie like that, guess that means I have some research to do...
First
1850318
Loser.
Nice lovely chapter here, and a merry Christmas and Happy Holidays and New Years, and anything else I might've missed to you.
Chapters like these are always heartwarming to read even though there really is nothing going on in them. Thanks for this second chapter in a second day, and looking forward to the next one whenever you put it up.
Cheers!
That slave thing. I nearly died of laughter, until I realized how wrong it was...
1850374
What's with the hating? It's just a joke...
Awesome.
A fine Merry Christmas to you. And thanks for the feels.
Two updates at the same day.
That's an academy record!
this was nice, merry christmas to you too
"Daww, that's sweet."
Those are the words that immediately slipped through my mouth when I finished reading.
...Aaand there goes my Man Card ©.
It was a very touch gesture to make everybody in the family had a bonding moment, and nice way to end Christmas, and now as you promise, next chapter will have more action and adventure, right?
Oh man, I can't wait, I bet the meeting was a clue of what it will happen latter, maybe some enemies to the crow, will kidnap (X), it make sense, that way they have a barraging chip in case their plans, go wrong, and boy did Celestia…what I saying, the 3 goddess, will have there heads on a stick if they ever make the minus of harm to (X), and there will no place in hell compare to there wrath if they make some serious damage: Like cut off one arm, or both his eyes.
Nettles to say, shit is going to get down, pretty soon
*Sees update*
Ooooooh, I wonder which of my favorites updated this time...
*Sees 'This Magic Moment' at the top*
That can't be right, it only updated the other day...
MFW a Christmas update on Christmas:
mimg.ugo.com/201001/35175/last-house-on-the-left.jpg
Good chapter.
1850729
I just did it to see if I'd get a reaction out of someone (common troll goal)
But I honestly mean no offence.
And I wanted to make sure no one else could say First!
Dawwww (face melts of the level of daww)
D'awww, this is sweet We need more adorable scenes with Celestia.
Oh god I dunno why I laughed so much but I did!
d'aaaawww makes me warm thinking about it.
Sorry but yeah good story so far.
*Daww shield integrity down to 5%*
She canna' take much mora' this, Cap'n!
But seriously, that ending was pure, unfiltered D'awwww.
So sweet, and funny. Like a child on Christmas morning.
Two chapters for Christmas? Best gift I've recieved. But what about Captain Jean Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise?
This is one of the best human/Celestia fics in my book.
You better watch out, you better not hate.
If you hear em comin, then it's probably too late.
Crystal Demons are comin to town.
They hear you when you're angry,
They feel you agonize,
If you be good until Hearth's Warming Day,
It won't be you they'll ostracize!
Oh...
You better watch out, you better not hate,
If you hear em comin, then it's probably too late.
Crystal Demons are comin TO TOWN!!
MERRY CHRISTMAS, EVERYPONY!!!
I would laugh so hard, if at the end of all of this you put: 'And then you woke up from the greatest dream you've ever had.'
Another lovely story.
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Mr. Rater,
Oopsy
My Bad.
I meant the end of the ribcage relative to your stomach. Ponies are short. I'm not the best at explaining things.
Please don't hate me!
I'm so sorry!
Proud member of the Confederate States of America,
ScatMan
Finally got around to reading this chapter, loved it!
-Dashie
1921276
Mr, Monkey7
Holy tits, that is funny!
Bless you,
ScatMan
WHAT'S IN THE BOOOOOOOOOX?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Can I ask when the next chapter is please
Great work by the way
1850318
*Throws blue shell*
Now that that is taken care of I can say how much I adore this story. Please continue this.
Would have articulated this more but I'm away from my computer and got a notification on my phone--so I just had to read it.
You know, when I first started reading this, I found myself thinking that this was another gorram Gary Stu in Equestria fic. I was mistaken.
What you have here is very cleverly written and of good, solid quality and I'm glad I found it. Solid plotting, decent grammar and spelling, plus or minus a few small things here or there, and while some of the characters seem a bit OOC (like Celestia) her personality is consistent nonetheless and doesn't jar me from the story's flow. Well done, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, naming Mace's wife Morning Star? Brings a whole new meaning to the term 'Ol Ball and Chain. Well played.
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more!
sooo…when is going to come up the next chapter?
2014092
Sir Lightingace,
I apologize for my extended absence. I can't say I've been busy, because I really haven't. I've been tremendously lazy.
However, my exams officially ended today, so I will be spending my free time writing, once again.
I can't say when the next chapter shall arrive, because I have no idea. I'm not finished it yet. I know what I want to write, but, for whatever reason, it's difficult for me to write. I don't know. I'm trying, though.
Last weeks episode kinda messed me up a bit, too, so I have to go back and edit or delete a couple of my jokes. Which sucks cause I thought they were funny. Oh well.
With undying love,
ScatMan
2017705
don't worry my good sir, I was merely concern about your well being and the reason of why why haven't hear about you for some time.
By all mean, take all the time you see fit to require to finish the chapter and don't rush yourself if you feel tired.
I understand your situation, that episode still confuse me, as to why Celestia make some decision, to her swear enemy.
I fear a storm cloud is approaching upon us my friend and such danger has force her to take extreme measures, and a being stronger than Discord
is putting me, very nervous.
Atte: Lighting Ace
2021452
Mr. Craig589,
(me shrugging)
I wouldn't know. The only HiE fic I've read is Sophistication and Betrayal, and he was a construction worker.
I suppose I thought I was being creative.
Oh well.
Live long and prosper,
ScatMan
Moar...? pretty pleeeeeeeease
This fanfic, it is a must read for all bronies who's waifu is Celestia. Its so varied in the tastes that it puts to the table it may be considered one of my favorite fanfics. There is a perfect balance between clop, and romance. I see only one problem, 'I' am one cynical fuck. I mean how unstable in the head do you have to be to hate stairs, or bully poor Prince Blueblood, just let him be a dick, don't be one by maliciously pranking him. So yes, wonderful story, excited about ch7.
Thank you for the great storie.
You seem to be hinting at some really good/possible story arcs... one is Celestia's concern for "me" and how she can get overprotective... I feel like this is something that you're kinda gently pushing this one rather than jumping right in and I'm kinda fine with that... but I'd like to see it start moving forward a bit more.
And then the next bit is "me" getting depressed about my family. I feel like it would be something that would plague "me" every now and again but I feel like I'd also have a moment when it's REALLY depressing... and I'd need some help getting through it. You could be planning this, maybe in the flashback bit, but I still feel like it's something you could explore.
"You’re just not a big fan of ponies using your marefriends’ name in vain." Now I'm no author, or proofreader, but isn't it supposed to be "marefriend's"? Marefriends' makes it sound plural to me. Otherwise, it's March, and I am reading this, FTW. Excellent chapter, as always, and I am about to read chapter 7. also, nice socks
only one thing I don't fuking like you thougt of Zecora as a Slave where the hell do you live texs ya racist bastered
but other then that I got nothing great story (minas the slave part)
2527985
Overreaction, thy name is "Dragon Blaze-X".
It was a joke. Joke = funny. Funny = . = good. Therefore, joke = good.
LOGIC!
Be nice or the demon ice monsters from a frozen hell will destroy the planet,’... Any one else thinks this reminds them of a movie?...
very very sweet, my friend i love this fic
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3895808 70% of my body is made of movies and video games (That... sounded healthier when Kojima said it.)... And I've yet to hear of a movie like that, guess that means I have some research to do...
Merry Christmas!