1981683 say that again . I loved it all so much And they where so cute and sweet together I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens to them.
Noticed some errors, it would probably be a good idea to go through what you have up so far to see what errors you can spot. It would also be a a good idea to have a proofreader go through what you have up so far, as well, maybe run everything, old and new, through a writing aid like Gramnarly
I think we found out the reason that he called 'Big' Mac
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Rainbow87Dash>Buh dum tssssh! Lols. Rimshots make everything funny...
1981683 say that again . I loved it all so much And they where so cute and sweet together I can't wait to see what happens between them next and what happens to them.
Noticed some errors, it would probably be a good idea to go through what you have up so far to see what errors you can spot. It would also be a a good idea to have a proofreader go through what you have up so far, as well, maybe run everything, old and new, through a writing aid like Gramnarly
As fun of a read this story is, some of the errors ruin my immersion
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He likes MacDonalds? Wink.