An HIE / Anon story about an American Veteran that winds up in Equestria during a hunting trip, and what follows as he tries to acclimate to his new life. Single-Mother Derpy Focused Romance, but involves (platonically) other characters.
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while i dont feel particularly bad for the dogs, do muss and the other griffons really not have any qualms about eating meat from creatures that were sentient and freshly killed? (even if said creatures weren't that smart and tried to enslave others)
edit: realized that i should have spoilered this a little too late, my bad to everyone that saw this before reading the chapter
Less slavers, smell of gunpowder, free birds and meat....not a bad day.
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Better eat, than let it rot. I think is in a grey zone. Its not canibalism.
Oh, just some casual murder. I'm sure that will go over well with the ponies. Wouldn't be at all surprised if this little outing got the Princesses interested in his gun and in turn got it confiscated. And if the parents of all the fillies that visit him find out he is capable and experienced in killing? I don't think those parents will let them hang around the resident human anymore.
No idea why this guy thought this was his solution to getting paid. Seems very shortsighted.
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They might have had more qualms about eating summat that wasn't trying to work them and a random filly to death.
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Rescuing people from moronic slavers isnt "Casual Murder" my guy.
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You can rescue without murder. And he was pretty damn casual about it.
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Man's missing a leg and various other bits of his physicality, going down there to run four slavers off mano-a-mano would have ended real bad. Shooting 'em was really the only option in the moment.
This is a lot better edited than the other two stories on the site. I'm guessing it's the "main" one.
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Absolutely deluded take.
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Because murder happens all the time in My Little Pony. Oh wait, it usually doesn't. Most creatures in Equestria would find killing to be pretty abhorrent. But sure, go ahead and ride your justice boners at the "justified" killing of sapient creatures. Yes, they were in the wrong. But that shouldn't have involved killing them.
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Explain how a man who's missing a leg and other bits would be able to fight off Diamond Dogs AND save the slaves without killing them.
Anyways, fantastic chapter and I cant wait to see more!
I like how you wrote the violence in this chapter. It wasn't overly gratuitous or gory when it had no reason to be and certainly showed off how professional ol' Non really is. Well done.
So much for "I hope he doesn't shoot any dogs," huh?
than
to save
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1: he's a soldier of course it was casual
2: no you can't, not on your own in a situation like this with little warning to it happening other than being in the moment
3: MC is a fucking cripple, down a leg and weakened from his injuries even if he's healed, guns are called 'the great equalizer' for a reason you ignorant fool
4: jesus christ you are a sheltered deluded fool.
You should probably shut up now and not speak up again, your naive bullshit is tiring and I just saw two of your comments at this point.
This is a really odd part of this fiction. I feel like this part was only written cause you wanted him to show off his army skills and shoot someone. It feels very forced and if there really was slavers so close to Ponyville Celestia would've exterminated them. I'm 100% sure she has regular military patrols out of sight around Ponyville. Why does EVERY soldier in fiction have the same horror story of a kid blowing themselves up? It didn't happen nearly that often.
🐉❤
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The universe takes pity on those kind of soldiers, so they're the ones that get sent to Equestria.
Это что цензура убийства?
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Yknow
If that were the case
Why was there a whole episode of Rarity because abducted by them? The show doesn't exactly have a good track record with foreign powers, what with Yak war, changelings, etc
Regardless, it's the authors interpretation of the world for the purpose of their story and these comments are silly.
me: holy shit, he's going to casually murder some diamond dogs for gems
me later: it sure was a good thing those DDs had taken Scoots, now he has an excuse. which he sure didn't when he left on this trip