An HIE / Anon story about an American Veteran that winds up in Equestria during a hunting trip, and what follows as he tries to acclimate to his new life. Single-Mother Derpy Focused Romance, but involves (platonically) other characters.
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Very interesting I'm a big derpy fan I'll keep an eye on it
Interesting story. Quick question, did any firearms come with this veteran to equestria?
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What use would any firearms be? A finite supply of ammo and then it's a club or a neato doorstop. He's better off with the locally sourced weapons if they would even let him have any, which I doubt.
This first chapter was pretty good! I enjoyed it.
If I had any critiques, it'd have to be the formatting and the sudden shift from second person to first person. But other than that, I liked it! Keep it up, author!
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good catch, didn't realize
trying to feel out my preferred writing style between stories, decided against second person early on
with injuries like that, he should’ve had a pretty good VA compensation benefits, until he got transported to Equestria. Disfiguring scars, anatomical loss of foot almost certainly Service connected psych at what’s probably at least a 50%.
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Thank goodness for that. 2nd person/reader-inserts are a niche too far for me...
Story seems interesting so far!
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Author's note patient file was a nice touch.
Tells us more about the protagonist appearance and behavior and how some ponies might regards him, all without the need for a clumsy intro description that would break the narrative.