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In an unknown place, the stubborn pony, Metal Scratch, observes her surroundings and those that reside hoping for some clarity.

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TwilightPB

TwilightPB #1 · Feb 20th, 2023 · · · Live nowhere ·

I know I've said it before, but I'm so proud of you for writing your first story.

It's the first leap forward into a wonderful world - the written word allows you to express yourself so utterly freely, allowing the reader to fall into whatever you've created, and come out of it with newfound love and insight.

I look forward to seeing what you have planned next!!!

metalscratch

metalscratch #2 · Feb 20th, 2023 · · · Live nowhere ·

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Feb 21st, 2023 · · · Live nowhere ·

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Uh... Is that meant to be a good thing?

MurderP0n7

MurderP0n7 #4 · Feb 21st, 2023 · · · Live nowhere ·

It's not to make you feel bad, but what attracted me to this story was the slightly out of place title, which is so because of the cover image it has... I mean, it has a cutimark that is 3 bloodlines , or is it literally a bleeding wound? It's a pity that your description wasn't so good, along with the number of words there, if the two chapters had been 1k each, I would have read them