Spike's Unexpected Surprise!
Making his way to the dorms, Spike took notice of the many clubs the campus had to offer as a way of both earning extra credit and learning different mdgic techniques from other students or staff members.
Looking, he took notice there were clubs for every subject the school had, and then some.
Black smithing, potion making, artifact reasearch, sports, animal taming, ect...
To his surprise, as well as any other first year male students that noticed, there was a girls only club for sexual seduction classes.
Looking to the stand itself, he seen a few girls showing themselves off in nothing but sexy lingerie.
Blushing from the sight, he averted his eyes as he began to speed up his pace towards the dormatory to escape any further embarressment that might of come from looking to such a club.
'My aunt's would kill me if I tried peeking on them or any girl!'
Up on the roof top, Celestia was in a giggling fit, trying her hardest not to bust out laughing from her nephews reaction.
Groaning, Luna could only hope things didn't escalate further during this school year.
"You just had to let that club to keep existing, didn't you Tia?"
Chuckleling, Celestia only rolled her eyes as she looked at her dear younger sister with a smug look upon her face.
"Oh please. This coming from the one who begged me to let students form it three decades ago so she herself could also attend the classes so she can finally get a boyfriend herself and failed?"
Blushing deep red from the memory, Luna tried to advert her eyes and pouted from how her sister kept the club going personally as a way to remind her of her previous endeavor of getting a boyfriend all those years ago.
"Oh, shut up Tia!"
Unfortunately for Luna, from seeing her act like this, Celestia's dam of giggles finally broke, and her laughter filled the area and could be heard by the passing students below.
After about twenty minutes of searching, Spike finaly found the dormatory he was assigned to stay in.
"Okay. All I gotta do now is find my room, unpack, then hunt down my aunts and see how there doing."
Walking up to the thirteen story building, he took notice of how there were way more girls around then there was boys in this paticular building.
'Huh, weird. I know from science class that women over populate the male gender three hundred to one, but even I'm a bit worried that maybe I'm falling into a trap set by my dear aunt Celestia. Then again, herds are known to form in this school so might as well try enjoying it while I can.'
Shrugging, he continued on to find his room and unpack to explore the place without a care in the world.
Climbing up the stairs, he made it to his assigned room on the tenth floor.
Looking around, he saw a few others huffing from the long climb up the stairs while he was still full of energy.
'Thank goodness for long walks and running through Everfree Forest.'
Without breaking his stride he continued on to his room number he was assigned for the school year.
Reaching his room, numbered 1035, he opened the door to find quite a sight that any boy would love to be welcomed to see.
Entering the room, he took in the new surroundings that was his new dorm room.
The dorm room itself was just like any other building on the academy campass, so thinking it would be a tight squeeze was thrown completely out the window, all because the room inside looked big enough to house a group of four people and then some.
Looking, he saw the room had a small fully-stocked kitchen, seventy-five inch flat-screen televission with two recliners and a four-person couch, two fully stocked bathrooms, a seperate room storing, to his amazement, a built-in hot spring, and four seperate bedrooms.
"Okay, gotta admit, this place is awsome. It's like a dream come true for any guy wanting a batchelor pad."
"~Thanks for the complement handsome.~"
"~Unfortunately, this isn't your room. It's ours.~"
"~So beat it kid. Before we make you leave by force.~"
Upon hearing a trio of voices behind him, he quickly turned around to look for the source and became completely stunned at the sight that stood before him.
Three beautifully, sexy girls stood before him with menancing faces.
But that is not what got his attention the most as his mind starts it's way into the highly perverted zone of his brain.
What really got his attention about the three beauties standing next to each other, blocking his only exit out of the room, before him the most was that they were all wearing nothing but their bra's and panties.
On the far left stood a dark purple skinned girl with long bright purple hair with streaks of bright blue that done up in pig tails being held by a pair of spiked clips. Standing at five foot nine, she had eyes that matched her skin. With a bust that looked to be a large C-cup covered in dark purple bra with matching panties.
Looking at her, Spike found that she stood there with a gaze that said she ment bussiness, and to him, she could back up anything she said easily.
On the far right, standing at five foot eight, stood a light blue skinned girl with light blue long hair with streaks of purple done up in a pony tail, being held by a blue spiked clip, that reached down and stopped just above her ass, and just as the other girl, her eyes matched her skin tone and had large C-cup bust covered in light red bra with matching panties.
Looking at her, he could tell she had a bubbely, charming, and yet, caring personality.
But out of the three, it was the one who stood in the center that made him freeze.
Standing at 5 foot ten, a bright ellow skinned girl with orange poofy hair with yellow streaks in a pony tail style, held together by a orang spiked clip, raching down halfway down her back, her eyes a light purple eyes, she had the most impressive bust at a large D-cup covered in a dark blue bra and matching panties.
Looking at her, he felt that she was the leader of the trio that he found himself facing off with.
Blinking his naughty thoughts to the side, he had a pretty good idea of what was going on.
'Note to self: prank aunt Tia extra hard for this one.'
Reaching into his pocket, he pulled out the sheet for his assigned room, and took a stance as if to show he was meaning no harm.
"Sorry girls, but I'm afraid your in my room."
Watching as the one in the center walke up to him and took the paper, he carefully watched her as she read it over, gaining a surprised look to her face as she found he was indeed telling the truth.
Sighing, she handed him the form back before she place a hand on her hip and used the other to rub her head from the coming headache.
"Sorry about that, wasn't expecting a guy to be our forth roommate. Not to mention be our team captain."
Chuckling, Spike placed the form back in his pocket.
"Ah, no worries I'm sure that... Wait, WHAT?!"
"~That's right dear nephew, your a team captain of these three beautiful ladies.~"
Turning to the direction of the new voice in the roo., everyone was surprised at see two paticular people in the doorway.
"Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna/Aunt Celestia and Aunt Luna?!"
Silence filled the room as everyone took in what happened the past few minutes.
Unfortunately, it was Luna who spoke up, breaking the silence.
"So, you three trying to seduce our nephew, or is he using some kind of spell to make you three do this?"
Taking in her words, Spike started to have a bad feeling.
Watching the three girls in bra and panties, he soon saw what was going to happen.
'Damn it.'
With three loud shrieks, Spike was soon given a kick in the balls, two fists in the face, and then a strong three person kick to the gut, sending him into a wall, knocking him out.
As soon as he was out cold, the three girls scrambled to there own personal rooms in search of clothes.
Letting out a long whistle, Luna was amazed at the three girls strength.
Celestia on the other hand was laughing her ass off seeing her plan for revenge on Spike actually work.
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Ok, a couple of things here... first of all, paper. Not parper. And second... are you rewriting this from Second Person and into a different viewpoint? If so, you might have missed something here. Especially since everything else has been in Third Person perspective so far, at least to my knowledge.
Whatever the case, I suggest giving the chapter a bit of TLC. It feels a little bit rough around the edges. But it's nothing that a little bit of polishing can't fix.
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Thx for the heads up, and the portion you mention has been revised.
Thank you!
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No problem.
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No problem when writing a story we tend to miss the small things because we're excited. Keep up the good work.
I'm definitely keeping an eye on the work, its is fascinating to see this scenario where Spike is in with the Dazzling sisters in the same dorm, and that they know--accidentally,mind you-- that Spike is at least related to the Royal Sisters (we know Luna is his aunt, I'm assumimg Celestia is Mom, which makes Spike an unofficial Prince of Equestia). I wonder id there are some slight reference to Spike fame in the Crystal Empire--maybe there could be a few Crystal Ponies that see Spike as a student. I wonder how Adagio and the other sisters react to that...
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I do plan on adding a few crystal ponies into the mix later on in the story.
But for Celestia and Luna, your gonna have to read the next chapter when it's released.
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😉Wait and see! I might just surprise ya.😉