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MOONPIES!!!
As a sidenote, I like one picture above all in this chapter. The one with the young shadow colt and Applebloom.
I tried to point out the differences between the two hemispheres of Equis and that the young yellow filly not only was from another gender, she looked alien to the little guy.
Also... Yes! Another cliffhanger! I know you hate me for it!
Damn you blueblood may you freeze in the ninth circle of hell
You played too much SC, huh?
but at least the Storyline goes on.
And I think BLueblood is in for a world of pain, at least from Cadence, woulda be nice to see her going insane and wrathfull
keep goin
Nordic
Normally I don't cus in reviews, but Blueblood is a complete asshole. I hope that when they get back he is arrested, and left to rot in the doungen. Or at least let Cadance seriously harm him if you don't save him. You know what, even if Shining is saved let her beat the crap out of Blueblood.
Anyway, another epic chapter, with a lot happening. The treat of war, the changling version of Azula, Celestia's kink. Things are really heating up. Also Tyler kicking more ass.
I wonder if that ship, and the Triangel will come up again. It is a nice little mystery there.
I have something to say regarding Luna finding a whay for Tyler to be able to give his herd mates children. If she could really find a whay o completly change them into human, which is what the cover image heavily implys will happen, it should be much easier to just change that one part of their biology whithout completly changing what they are.
Looking forword to the next chapter. Good luck with all of your endeavors.
P.s - Have you thought about making your own map of the world to go with your story.
Please tell me that in some moment of this history Blueblood is going to die, and that it will a veryyyy painfully
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Well... Cadance is the Princess of Love...
But I think we all agree it's never wise to piss of an alicorn mare by abandoning her beloved to the Changeling swarm.
You don't do that... You. Don't. Do. That!
For that stunt, death is too easy. I already got some ideas...
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Azula... Well I looked that one up and I must admit I never watched the Avatar series... yet!
So if there is a similarity, it's more of a coincidence.
As for the Bermuda Triangle, both the USS Cyclops and George Worley (who was an captain/officer on that ship) really existed and are believed to have dissapeared in the Bermuda Triangle with a crew over 300 men. A steel coffin... May they rest in peace, whereever they are.
Oh oh... cliffhanger!
1414666 I agree with you wholeheartedly.
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Definitly watch the series. It is one of the gratest cartoon series of all time, in he opinion of many. Just try to bare some of the slower episodes in the first season. Also its spinoff The Legend of Korra.
Even if it was coincidence watching Azula just might give you some ideas.
Just wow.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
Another great chapter man but...god damn you and your cliff hangers!!! T_T Just hope that Shining Armor shall be okay...and also the ended seemed kinda like a reference to Starcraft where Sarah Karrigan got overwhelmed by the zerg.
Side note...if my own character was there he would have royally chewed out blueblood and asked the crew if being a pony of equestria meant leaving behind their comrades and friends.
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Nice idea! The work on a world map has begun today and already the vague landmass are set. You know... To make the story 20% cooler.
My congrats and praises are ran out, because of your awesomeness. You brighten my day man. So thank you!
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Cool. looking forword to seeing that.
And here I propose a magnificent idea for Tyler... Jettison Blue balls out the window, take control of the ship and save the day. I will NOT be happy if Shining Armor and the rest of his squad die, all because of that stupid!, pompous!, white!, MEANIE!!!
I agree with Chrony... May he INDEED, freeze in the ninth circle of hell.
Also... Thanks to you and that cliffhanger... I have no nails left >.<
Seriously though, the story is amazing, I need more Keep up the good work!
Wow, man! This is one astounding chapter! Whatever you do, don't stop writing this story till it's finished!!
Yup i can only imagine what Cadence and Tyler will do when they get back in Canterlot with the princesses.
Perhaps an public assault on him :D
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Would you mind to go into detail? Is the pacing too fast or too slow in your opinion?
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As of this moment, nothing is planned with Discord. But if you take a look on the map, you'll see that there actually are countries with the origins of dragons and draconiquis (or whatever that species is called ) Other things will happen before anything in that direction. happens
@all
9452 words done, yet not completed. I was lazy the last few days getting fresh air into my brain. Those nasty plotholes need to be fixed. Writing an epic battle on the fields of the Enclave is harder than I first expected it to be...
What I can tell you is that things get messy back in Canterlot. Like said before: NEVER piss off an alicorn...
Please sir may i have some more
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Sure, Oliver Twist... Almost done here...
1475322 Excellifore
sry about long post
"...March 15. 1981
This will be my last entry. I don’t know what happened. In one second on the other, the ocean vanished and our ship was falling. The rocks have crippled..."
I think you got the 8 and 1 transposed.
BTW, While the cargo was manganeese ore, the ship did have a 5" gun in case of commerce raiders or subs. You can bet the bore would be rusted out after an entire lifetime on a stormy mountain and previous exposure to salt, but the shells.. If they didnt go off and kill the crew on impact, they could be a problem if looters find them and figure out they can explode. this could come back to bit his tailless butt if nothing is done about them...
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Thank you for the kind notice, it is already corrected. Although I must say... A WWI ship and a log of 1981... Shame on me for not noticing...
As for the shells... I doubt looters would go near a giant mountain of rusty steel, even more if it's filled with the bones of strange aliens. And if that wasn't enough, the people of Equis know no 5" guns for that matter. Looters could as well only wonder what this rusty old apparatus is
i forsee the chopping-block in bluenloods future.
wing commander vi reference
yes YES
Blueblood you mother fucking cower how can you do this i don,t know why Celestia sent you
Starcraft reference ib the part
Double Dematerialisation Defines Demerits
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I think you miss the point. Shining made this extra example to point out that they are not bound to their physical pony bodies while in the shadows. So they could squeeze through tiny cracks and holes if it's only dark in those places. Places a normal pony could never enter. Attacking from the shadows is only the attack behaviour. The other part is an extra ability.
Welp! I'm off to Bermuda!
And I'm bringing tanks!
Why that back stabbing...
6781485 dont forget about me for I am about to bring THE RAIN
7439061 pfft pleasevignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/e/ec/Venator_clonewars.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20110918171254
Does the poor man even have a choice? Or Celestia can't keep her lust in check?