A world class assassin, transported to Equestria saves the city from Tempest Shadow's invasion, only to find that there's a much bigger plot looming over the horizon, and only the Storm King's commander can help him stop it.
Before she could say anything, John closed the door to the bathroom, blocking her view of the human before she could see any more of his unclothed body. She opened her mouth to protest at the denial of her line of sight on the object of her interest, but quickly shut her mouth and shook her head. The sound of running water soon reached her ears through the closed bathroom door.
Tempest is very cute for a mare of her talents. Happy she got to enjoy a heartwarming shower before heading back into the frying pan. Hopefully everything goes according to plan... just like everything else so far... Ah bollocks.
Enjoying the story so far, got good pace and balance of action and meaningful moments. I like how they are both oblivious to Tempest's feelings towards John, meanwhile I'm rooting for the girl to finally have something nice happen to her. I wonder how John will react when he finds out.
Kinda funny really. Medical attention and a hot shower was one of the first things Tempest experienced in my story as well.
Tempest was really enjoying the view
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She sure was...
Tempest is very cute for a mare of her talents. Happy she got to enjoy a heartwarming shower before heading back into the frying pan. Hopefully everything goes according to plan... just like everything else so far... Ah bollocks.
Enjoying the story so far, got good pace and balance of action and meaningful moments. I like how they are both oblivious to Tempest's feelings towards John, meanwhile I'm rooting for the girl to finally have something nice happen to her. I wonder how John will react when he finds out.
Nice Job! 👍
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Good chapter so far.. really enjoyed it.