awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

• Savage Types – Basic Ferals.
• Wraithslicers – Ferals that have the weakest of eyesights, but incredible hearings.

The guard smirked, “No harm is to come to the human, huh? Well, we'll see if she'll keep that order if something were to happen and he happens to be the cause of it.” he snickered, as he left.

Oh shit!!!!!

It seems not all Ferals are same and thank goodness Spike let the girls, especially Twilight go with him or else, he had no idea about the feral variants.

They better be looked out cause all of guards are corrupted and they likely want to kill Spike, fortunately, at least Shining Armor doesn't view Spike as a monster unlike those guards.

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Spike looked down and blushing while thinking, 'I have a girl pony cuddling me in a bed. This is real!' he mentally cheered.

Glad that he went from want nothing to do with the girls to be exciting about sleeping with one of the girls.

Character development

As the feral was right on top of Spike, the boy flew up as the wraithslicer landed on the conveyor belt and pulled right into the machine. The girls looks away as they heard the crunching and slicing of the feral's body as it went through the compactor. Then out from the end was a compressed cube of the feral's mutilated body.

Well, it's official…. This is definitely going to be the darkest Spike's harem story that Wildcard put on… especially with the killing stuffs and apocalypse stuffs.

“Ok, that was the grossest thing I ever saw!” Rarity said looking a little green.

Get used to it, Rarity… you are in the Mad Max-type world… so get used to that!

“This is amazing.” Spike gasped, “Twilight with your research on the ferals, and my research on the location of the Garden we really could make it there.”

Look like Twilight will be the Ferals' expert… I wonder what job that girls going to have so they have a reason for being there to help Spike out?

Sunset and Spike were attaching fresh new wheels and tires to the vehicle, before Twilight and Luster used their magic to raise the vehicle up allowing Applejack and Rainbow Dash to work on the bottom of it. As Rainbow was trying to tighten it she ended up getting a shot of oil in the face making the girls laugh, while she gave them a dry look.

Ha ha ha ha ha! To be fair, she did got carried away!

After hours or hard work and fun, Spike and the girls stood before the Winnebago that looked like it was fresh off the market. It's new paint job was silver, and decorated with hot rod flames with images, of stars, apples, diamonds, balloons, butterflies, rainbow colored lightning bolts, and two sun images within the flames, and the hood ornament was of a dragon.

Yeah! Spike and the girls got their own Mad Max-type vehicle! Now they can go on their journey without being tired a lot!

Awesome work!

I hope you don't mind Wildcard but I noticed some errors in the chapter:

“So, now that we got enough food and dink, we'll need some way to store it.” Spike said.

drink

Everyone was cautious, until they saw something leap out from a junk pile which was a feral beast that looked tiger-like, with bat shaped ears, and sharp claws. The group jumped away as the creature landed on the ground growling.

After hours of hard work and fun, Spike and the girls stood before the Winnebago that looked like it was fresh off the market. It's new paint job was silver, and decorated with hot rod flames with images, of stars, apples, diamonds, balloons, butterflies, rainbow colored lightning bolts, and two sun images within the flames, and the hood ornament was of a dragon.

“Right. A promise.” Spike agreed, as they hugged before heading back to the hotel room to get some much needed sleep.

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that one guard is gonna make human life very hard now.

I hope he goes back to sleep with rarity...

So that pony guard is going to be a obstacle for Spike and co.... not for long

Nice chapter! Now I see that the girls have a good motivation to leave Canterlot along with Spike!)
The only thing I would condemn the heroes for is that they do not leave anyone on watch while the others are asleep. You know, just in case. After all the world beyond walls are filled with danger....
I wonder when and where Starlight Glimmer is going to appear in this story (and also how does SHE relate to humans?). I'm sure that the tag with her name is there not just for the beauty😏. I'll be waiting for her appearance. Good luck!!))

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Not for long he ain't!!!

This story has the appropriate rating for a sex tag.

That one guard is definitely going to regret trying to get in their way, perhaps if the group left him and his co-conspirators to the ferals.

Why do I get the feeling that the ferals are like a combo of the monsters from Maze runner, Sweet home and left for Dead?

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True and don’t forget about bandits or raiders who survived and got left behind.