The commonwealth is a ruthless deadly place, that will kill you without hesitation. So I thought to myself why don’t I bring two very different, and yet similar, people into A world that will mentally, physically and emotionally damage you
10644058 That depends. Would Luna have the patience to crank that thing every single time just to get one shot. They both will extend the other weapons but Luna might remain with the pistol for now.
10644133 She might since she would be like nah why fight for ages let’s show the, we have this and be like fall in line or be blasted she’s political like that
10644197 Yes but in the world of fallout you won’t have the luxury of healing a bullet wound easily. She needs weapons that can shoot faster and allow her to be more agile. After all if she wants a laser beam she could just use her horn.
10644309 Thanks also as I said why bother fighting though a area or building or a death claw nest when you can just nuke it with a giant laser or Anna take over the entire commonwealth and wastelands a simple show of force could work
Also why do I wanna have my own oc in this universe causing mayhem but not interacting directly with Luna just for the effect of somone saying when she first meets them.
I personally don't think its Luna's fault for what happened, but Celestia's. How the hell does she expect her sister, who has a 1000 years out of date information of how the world works, to run a kingdom? She could at least have given Luna lessons on modern day technology, politics, nations, and other general information before throwing her into the deep end. But thats Celestia for you, tossing you into the water expecting you to learn how to swim before you sink.
10645573 No I don’t think it’s Luna’s fault. But I don’t think it’s fully to blame on Celestia. Most of the chapters she remains tired. (there is a reason behind this to) I should’ve specified by Celestia only picked easy task for a sister to do. She had no idea about the investigation that was taking place. And Luna has been taking some lessons just not for so long. Her sister realized it was too early. That’s why she would take most of the blame especially when going to meet the Griffin diplomats. In celestial own way, she was just trying to help her sister. But sometimes that isn’t enough and you can accidentally hurt someone you love.
That's not exactly what I expected for the start, It definitly would have been better on Celestia's part if she hadn't started that agresive, but what should you expect from a mare that doesn't drink coffe in the morning.
Why are there so many red tags?
Interesting... some editing could improve very much the quality, but very interesting. I'll be aware of the next chapter.
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Welcome to Fallout
You’ve got me interested comrade.
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If i had to guess, he is just making sure he's not breaking any kind of guidelines in the near future for fimfiction rules.
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You’re basically on the money. But it could possibly get that dark.
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One question who gets the sattalite laser ray gun Eric or Luna
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That depends. Would Luna have the patience to crank that thing every single time just to get one shot. They both will extend the other weapons but Luna might remain with the pistol for now.
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She might since she would be like nah why fight for ages let’s show the, we have this and be like fall in line or be blasted she’s political like that
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Yes but in the world of fallout you won’t have the luxury of healing a bullet wound easily. She needs weapons that can shoot faster and allow her to be more agile. After all if she wants a laser beam she could just use her horn.
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True seems more the kill a building opition
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It's called Euclid's C-Finder. It's not a gun, per say, rather a targeting device for an orbital laser strike
Art by CaptainPudgeMuffin IIRC if anyone's curious
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Orbital laser strike: noted👍
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Thanks also as I said why bother fighting though a area or building or a death claw nest when you can just nuke it with a giant laser or Anna take over the entire commonwealth and wastelands a simple show of force could work
Also why do I wanna have my own oc in this universe causing mayhem but not interacting directly with Luna just for the effect of somone saying when she first meets them.
Not another one
This has a lot of potential plse keep updating this.
Great story !!! I hope she will not be abandoned.
I personally don't think its Luna's fault for what happened, but Celestia's. How the hell does she expect her sister, who has a 1000 years out of date information of how the world works, to run a kingdom? She could at least have given Luna lessons on modern day technology, politics, nations, and other general information before throwing her into the deep end. But thats Celestia for you, tossing you into the water expecting you to learn how to swim before you sink.
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Good point, but would she be able to resist the opportunity to rain death upon her enemies from space?
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Thank you. Please tell me what you liked and disliked.
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No I don’t think it’s Luna’s fault. But I don’t think it’s fully to blame on Celestia. Most of the chapters she remains tired. (there is a reason behind this to) I should’ve specified by Celestia only picked easy task for a sister to do. She had no idea about the investigation that was taking place. And Luna has been taking some lessons just not for so long. Her sister realized it was too early. That’s why she would take most of the blame especially when going to meet the Griffin diplomats. In celestial own way, she was just trying to help her sister. But sometimes that isn’t enough and you can accidentally hurt someone you love.
That's not exactly what I expected for the start, It definitly would have been better on Celestia's part if she hadn't started that agresive, but what should you expect from a mare that doesn't drink coffe in the morning.
Damn, only part 1 of the prologue and already hit with a tear-jerker....... I can tell this is gonna be good.
Now I'm sad