The commonwealth is a ruthless deadly place, that will kill you without hesitation. So I thought to myself why don’t I bring two very different, and yet similar, people into A world that will mentally, physically and emotionally damage you
well, it's not really what i expected but it's still ok, i would rather it wasn't a game and there wasn't a way back, it still seems quite interesting also i like the interaction of luna and eric, i am very satisfied with the amount of words of the chapter, I wait impatiently for the next episodes !!!
Luna looked back at Eric and snapped back into focus. “It was known as balance. The way of a leader…. Over 1000 years ago there was a duel against... two very powerful beings… A Battle to see who would decide the fate of the world... And the sun won… and everypony was happy... but the moon… its ways and teachings have been banned ever cents.”
10661452 At first I was going to do that ... but then I thought of something else. I don’t mean to sound cocky But I’m pretty sure I can get your full interest by the fourth chapter. Unfortunately I won’t be making chapters this long, this often. probably only on special occasions.
Interesting, Eric has the word knowledge, while Luna has none and will be forced to rely on another to help her through, while already showing some serious issues of her own regarding the most important aspect of the game
The story starts well, it's interesting to see what happens next.
Take your time to post the next chapters, I'm nobody for you, but take your time with the plot of your story, many have gone too far and froze their creations, I don't want this story to stop at the beginning / middle or before the end.
Hmm, in original cryopods didn't fail. Life support was shutdown intentonally, those two pods were left as a backup. Years later Shawn found about that and arranged his parents revival, perhaps not aware that mercenary killed one. So it clearly a different story here, no Institute meddling perhaps?
10708244 Please tell me it will be some time this month. this is great.I recommend that Eric gets to go to Equestria after this adventure since his brains will be blown out if he goes back. If his brains aren't blown out then he will either die from being killed by that gang or if he calls the cops he will most likely go to jail along with gang members that get arrested. but that's just a personal opinion. you do you.
10815712 Sorry about this but you’re gonna have to wait an extra day. Well I’m all done the chapter my editor has not yet gotten back to me. So I’m editing it myself.
Mein Gott, I am loving this so far. Haven't read many stories involving fallout, as there aren't many I've found with humans involved. So this is just awesome. Plus it's fallout 4, which is my favorite right next to new vegas, but for different reasons.
Nice chapter. I will gladly read this story. Just one question. Did you change the name of pip boy to pit boy on purpose or is it a mistake?
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I fucking knew it. Fuck! I swore I heard it be called the pit boy. But it’s a pip boy thank you for your help
yay
This is going as fun can't with for character interactions with the 1st 3
well, it's not really what i expected but it's still ok, i would rather it wasn't a game and there wasn't a way back, it still seems quite interesting also i like the interaction of luna and eric, i am very satisfied with the amount of words of the chapter, I wait impatiently for the next episodes !!!
since
Will there be a timeskip?
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I can promise you two fallout character interactions in the next chapter.
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At first I was going to do that ... but then I thought of something else. I don’t mean to sound cocky But I’m pretty sure I can get your full interest by the fourth chapter. Unfortunately I won’t be making chapters this long, this often. probably only on special occasions.
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No. There probably won’t be any for the next three chapters.
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Thank you I will be awaiting with great interest
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I was thinking of doing some thing special with it.
Interesting, Eric has the word knowledge, while Luna has none and will be forced to rely on another to help her through, while already showing some serious issues of her own regarding the most important aspect of the game
The story starts well, it's interesting to see what happens next.
Take your time to post the next chapters, I'm nobody for you, but take your time with the plot of your story, many have gone too far and froze their creations, I don't want this story to stop at the beginning / middle or before the end.
Good Luck :)
Apply brotherhood of steel to commonwealth for best results in removing mutants and or synths
This should be good
Hmm, in original cryopods didn't fail. Life support was shutdown intentonally, those two pods were left as a backup. Years later Shawn found about that and arranged his parents revival, perhaps not aware that mercenary killed one. So it clearly a different story here, no Institute meddling perhaps?
Update?
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Soon
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Please tell me it will be some time this month. this is great.I recommend that Eric gets to go to Equestria after this adventure since his brains will be blown out if he goes back. If his brains aren't blown out then he will either die from being killed by that gang or if he calls the cops he will most likely go to jail along with gang members that get arrested. but that's just a personal opinion. you do you.
Sorry for my previous comment. I am also looking forward to the next chapter. wonder how Cogsworth will take seeing Luna?
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No problem, it’s just hard to get motivated sometimes. The next chapter will be over soon either before or on May 15.
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Thank you(bear hugs with mysterious popping sound/back cracking from you)
so close. just a little longer (fidgets in anticipation) I can hold out, I can hold out.
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Sorry about this but you’re gonna have to wait an extra day. Well I’m all done the chapter my editor has not yet gotten back to me. So I’m editing it myself.
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no worries. just make sure to know the difference between there, their, and they're.
Mein Gott, I am loving this so far. Haven't read many stories involving fallout, as there aren't many I've found with humans involved. So this is just awesome. Plus it's fallout 4, which is my favorite right next to new vegas, but for different reasons.