pretty good the second prologue, keep it up!

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Hey! And do you want to add anything to the like/dislike pile

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Well, it caught my attention that Discord was analyzing Erik's last event, he would have thought that being a Spirit of chaos he would have snapped his fingers making the moon and Erik appear in a random world or reality, however I like this discord that is acting like a change agent and not like an atomic idiot XD hehe
Now, in which part of Fallou will you make them appear or take them to separate places and have them come together?

I always occasionally look for Fallout crossovers with Luna in it as the main character but could only find a few. Can't wait to see where you come up with this story!

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This will be a realistic version of fallout 4. With a few twists. That’s all I’ll say for that.

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I don’t plan to disappoint.

Good premise and good layout for the story. I like the uncertainty that Luna holds and the distress with Eric, which certainly will carry over well into the Capitol Wasteland. Although, I do recommend fixing up the grammar in the first chapter. The story itself suffers from the errors in the first chapter and almost drove me away, but once I saw the second chapter, it became much better to read. You can always read the chapter out loud or in google translate before posting, or get an editor. Otherwise, a pleasant read.

this looks interesting cant wait to read when more chapters are out

Ah Discord, you sometimes can do the kindest things.

Piper and Nick's reactions is going be entertaining. I wonder how the BoS and Institute are going to see Luna?

consider me intrigued. i will add this to my watch list ^^

You just make the list...

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Thank you all for commenting. Please let me know what you liked and disliked about my story.

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Only time will tell

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But... why..?

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the issue with the Euclid's C-Finder is that it's a fallout new vegas weapon tied to a platform in the mojave desert called HELIOS One

where will they apper? the valt? are they going to a universe where the main charicter died or didnt exist? I expect poy cuddles!

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I just expect this will be not a dead story in the near future

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Euclid's C-Finder does not work inside buildings in the game, heh

If you've played Fallout New Vegas, you can obtain the device from a kid in Freeside, but it's useless unless you divert the electricity from the Helios Power Plant into the Archimedes satellite

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i sadly have not started reading it yet but I will get to it soon

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Fair, but Celestia has been know to be a terrible teacher.

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Why what? He saved the dudes life. And got him out of a terrible situation that he was in. And is possibly going to give him a friend. So I say he's being kind, in a way

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Yes... and as he said. “Celestial will find out I’m out of my stone prison.”

Considering all this takes one week after nightmare moon it’s clear to say he is still in Stone prison. He hasn’t even begun his redemption arc... so why is he doing this...

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Chaos, simply chaos. Who knows, he's a chaotically fun guy

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Greetings my friend. Thank you for leaving a comment on my story. Feel free to add anything to the like/dislike pile

An alternate start mod starring Eric and Luna? I like this premise already. Discord’s a slightly better teacher than Celestia.

Yoooo, he needs some milk.

Story is good. But you need someone to help with a little grammar and punctuation.

Never understood why people kill themselves, like, if you were betrayed kill the person that did it, not yourself.

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Kinda shortsighted