The commonwealth is a ruthless deadly place, that will kill you without hesitation. So I thought to myself why don’t I bring two very different, and yet similar, people into A world that will mentally, physically and emotionally damage you
10819262 I’m glad you think it’s better. I thought I could do better in a few areas but i’m saving the good stuff for the next chapter. Tell me your thoughts and theories because there are a few mysteries if you look close enough.
I am enjoying this story however I do hope ya get Eric away from any drugs like jet and what not. Other then that it’s enjoyable so keep on making awesome chapters!
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Thanks P-F44 for another great chapter. I just started reading this story and have found it to be quite enjoyable and well written thus far. I hope we get to see a new addition to this story soon. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
Eric scratched his arm which didn’t catch Luna’s attention. ‘God it’s only been a day and I am already starting to scratch. If things don’t change. I might need to take some jet or maybe even a psycho just to get rid of this feeling.’ He thought to himself
Oh please don't make him become a chem addict...... honestly I may end up stop reading if that becomes the case, can't fucking stand addicts of any kind. Lost too many people to it........
God damnit!!!! Why is this still not updated.... I love how this story is going and it feels like the game end glitch that my Xbox copy of Fallout 4 has.... No matter how many times I deleted the game it always comes back... What I would give to have a mod that let's me have Luna join me as a companion like it starts in this story.... Please continue this since their is no Luna ponies companion mod for Fallout 4...
Good chapter 👍
yesss! YESsss!!*starts read* YYYYEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!
Worth the wait
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Was it what you were expecting
Excellent, it's still alive
why do I feel like Luna is going to get the wrong idea from dogmeat's name?
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No. But I like this more. I also thought the bloatflies shoot there own young in larval form at you.
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I’m glad you think it’s better. I thought I could do better in a few areas but i’m saving the good stuff for the next chapter. Tell me your thoughts and theories because there are a few mysteries if you look close enough.
I am enjoying this story however I do hope ya get Eric away from any drugs like jet and what not. Other then that it’s enjoyable so keep on making awesome chapters!
Thanks P-F44 for another great chapter. I just started reading this story and have found it to be quite enjoyable and well written thus far. I hope we get to see a new addition to this story soon. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
Please...I beg of you... I... need...more.(dying of being starved of more story)
Please tell me you might have at least some of the DLC in the story.
Sorry for being over dramatic
Me gustó la historia
Nooooooo, cmon Lulu you must take the shinies!!
Oh please don't make him become a chem addict...... honestly I may end up stop reading if that becomes the case, can't fucking stand addicts of any kind. Lost too many people to it........
Keep it going
sir, can I have some more?
Must have mooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee please
update?
Update?
God damnit!!!! Why is this still not updated.... I love how this story is going and it feels like the game end glitch that my Xbox copy of Fallout 4 has.... No matter how many times I deleted the game it always comes back... What I would give to have a mod that let's me have Luna join me as a companion like it starts in this story.... Please continue this since their is no Luna ponies companion mod for Fallout 4...