Star Gaze, a young stallion with an eye for the heavens, is accused of a crime he did not commit and is banished to the moon alongside several known criminals. There, he finds an entirely new civilisation and way of life as laid out by the Moon's Ruler, Nightmare Moon. During his exile, Star finds friendship in his new community and attempts to get used to his new home. But living under the rule of Nightmare Moon comes with a new set of laws and, if that wasn't bad enough, he keeps seeing things at the corner of his vision. Maybe there's more to the Moon than he originally thought...
And, the all-important question remains: Will Star ever be able to go home?
Chapters (3)
great start! I can see this fic going places.
I see she went Bananas in more ways than one!
This is a good story, I like it. Please continue
Hello, it's me. Just thought I'd let you ponies know that I am not dead and Chapter 2 will be here soon. Very soon.
Thank you for the feedback so far. Here's hoping I can entertain you even further!
That... was awesome. Love the premise of this story, I look forward to reading more.
Damn that took for ever
Good story, but it would be nice if you didn't take so long to update. Sorry for being greedy.
Thanks for the feedback, guys!
But I will definitely work a lot harder from here on out!
Sorry it took so long to get Chapter 2 out for you. I have trouble getting things done...
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You're not being greedy at all! Knowing that all of you are still interested in the story means I'm definitely going to keep this going!
Thank you for sticking around!
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no problem. good stories need recognition.
"He shall be returned to my throne room next Night."
Dear Celestia. Railby, my dear friend. Have you started writing clop?
EDIT: You might wanna fix that small typo...
Hay, ponies, Railby here for a quick update.
Obviously, I haven't been submitting chapters for a
little whilelong time, but trust me when I say I haven't quite yet decided to stop writing.What with school, having trouble with figuring out what how I actually want to set out the story and a lot of general laziness on my part, I really haven't written
a lotmuch at all in the past few months.But this isn't dead yet!
Every time I've thought about this story, I've felt very guilty about leaving all of you ponies, who provided me with such positive feedback, hanging. I'm really sorry about that.
But, cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye, I promise I will work on this and get something out soon for all of you. I don't want this dying any more than you do. I hope to get several chapters out over the next month or so, so stick around!