You have a point as far as time progression goes. It's been... what... 4 chapters on this one particular day? But rest assured, there are timeskips on the horizon and it shouldn't be long before the Nightmare Night period. Much as I love writing the "Mommy Celestia" parts, as one reader phrased them, I plan on the pace speeding up shortly.
1539865 Hah! I never even considered that while I was writing. Or perhaps you just have a dirty mind, hmm? ;)
Far as living up to their name... I dunno about that. To me, the word seduce implies subtlety. You know, gradual enticement that eventually escalates. Dog-piling the guy = seduction? Nah, too direct, too forceful! Besides, wouldn't imply that such things as a dog humping somebody's leg would equate to it seducing them?
I am loving this story so far It's extremely detailed and lore-friendly, sure I kinda don't like the pace, but if thats the price of perfection I guess I can deal with it.
Glad you're liking it, though it is troubling what you said about the pace, since a few people already mentioned it. I didn't realize things had bogged down so much, but with multiple people taking umbrage, I'll definitely take care to speed things back up for next time.
Daedra: I hope you like OBLIVION GATES Sheogorath! Hah! Watcha gonna do now?
Sheo: You do remember who you're fighting, right? As in specifically who in the universe you have decided to fuck with? And you go and try to use the exact same trick against me, again? Okay, I can get behind this. Ah the nostalgia! I'mma gonna make some cool shit with those Oblivion runes, oh how I missed that let me tell you.
I love how you portray Sheogorath in this fic. You can put the god into the hero but you can't take the hero out of the god.
1541473 Well mainly assuming him because of the gates... and I say semi-avatar, because if it was an avatar of his, I would assume him to go the 20 foot tall horned demon route he did in Cyrodill.
Both excellent points. However, if you read the book Liminal Bridges from Oblivion (http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Lore:Liminal_Bridges) it mentions that such gates aren't exclusive to any one prince, but rather can be created by any of them through the use of a sigil stone, so while the gates might be Dagon's trademark, it doesn't necessarily mean it's him.
As far as appearance goes, why do you think he'd go with the giant form again? All it does is make him more of a target. Besides, the last time Dagon tried that, he got hamstrung by a guy the size of his hand. And the guy was mortal at that point!
1541576 True, but you never know, maybe he held a grudge against the ex-champion of cyrodill that became the next.... sheo.... I know I would if my plans of invasion were stopped due to one mortal, and another turned avatar for Akatosh.
That was brilliant. Sheer brilliance, all around. I love your take an Sheogorath, and wonder what would happen if him, Discord, and Pinkie got together...
Not gonna lie here, there aren't many Elder Scrolls X MLP Crossovers, but this has easily been the best so far. I like what you did with Haskill, though I kinda have to agree with Sheo on the matter of why in the world does Dagon want Alduin so badly? Keep it up, I eagerly await more.
This is... surprisingly awesome. Seriously. I like this. A Skyrim/MLP Crossover I actually like. Are you SURE the world didn't end and this isn't the afterlife?
One bright day in the middle of night Two dead boys got up to fight Back to back they faced each other Drew their swords and shot each other A def policeman heard the noise and ran to save the two dead boys And if you don't believe it's true, go ask the blind man, he saw it to
My grandmother taught me a different version of that poem.
One fine day, in the middle of the night, Two dead boys got up to fight, Back to back they faced each other, Drew their swords and shot each other, A deaf policeman heard the noise, And came and caught those two dead boys.
As to the content of the story, I'm very impressed. Sheogorath is portrayed as Awesome and the Daedric Prince he fought was suitably dastardly. Maybe it's Molag Bol.
I do hope that the timeskips occur soon and bring us to Spike's POV as he discovers his true origin. I'd also like to see his arms grow into wings, but that's just personal preference.
Sheogorath riding a dragon. This fic is beyond awesome right now. And it was most decidedly awesome before. Okay, maybe I'm overdoing it a little, but this is still an excellent and read-worthy fic in my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I really like this story. I especially like the Twilight/Avatar of Akatosh bit, which neatly (in my humblest opinion) gives a reason behind Rapidash Twilight. But I do have a question will Twilight be able to speak Dovah? And I don't mean the Thu'um. I can also only assume that pesky Dovahkin is going to be coming back at some point.
An orb of fire shot from his hand. It hit the ground and erupted in a burst of heat and flame. The blast flung him into the air, sending his burned and tattered body on a collision course with the still approaching Daedra.
All the awesome. Though know this. Happy endings better be all around!
Best wishes your awesome writer!
My god. Yes.
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My only concern is the very slow rate at which this story is advancing. Hopefully, you don't intend to go over everything.
Well, that was awesome. Definitely worth the wait.
Sounds like seducers are living up to their name, eh?
(Not an error, just showing where my attention was directed for a second.)
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You have a point as far as time progression goes. It's been... what... 4 chapters on this one particular day? But rest assured, there are timeskips on the horizon and it shouldn't be long before the Nightmare Night period. Much as I love writing the "Mommy Celestia" parts, as one reader phrased them, I plan on the pace speeding up shortly.
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Hah! I never even considered that while I was writing. Or perhaps you just have a dirty mind, hmm? ;)
Far as living up to their name... I dunno about that. To me, the word seduce implies subtlety. You know, gradual enticement that eventually escalates. Dog-piling the guy = seduction? Nah, too direct, too forceful! Besides, wouldn't imply that such things as a dog humping somebody's leg would equate to it seducing them?
1539914 69% of all Americans can find something dirty in almost every sentence. There was something dirty in that sentence.
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Oh, oh, I've got it! It's that the percentage sign kinda looks like a certain male bodily part in between two female bodily parts? Or... wait...
1539939 It's a type of sex position. I'm blunt like that. But that might be a symptom of my self diagnosed craziness, even thought I'm not a doctor.
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*Grins* Yea, I caught that soon as I read it. The tricky part was finding some other potentially sexual part of the sentence to call attention to.
1539976 Ah. Today I woke up with a migraine, (Yes, a migraine.) so I am having trouble picking up if something is ignorance, or fake ignorance.
I am loving this story so far It's extremely detailed and lore-friendly, sure I kinda don't like the pace, but if thats the price of perfection I guess I can deal with it.
Damn, son.
Oh, hell yes. New chapter!
HOH MY GAWD!!!
Epic, truly epic as usual
Glad to see your return, I look forward to more
So awesome!
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Glad you're liking it, though it is troubling what you said about the pace, since a few people already mentioned it. I didn't realize things had bogged down so much, but with multiple people taking umbrage, I'll definitely take care to speed things back up for next time.
Awesome.
About time.
Daedra: I hope you like OBLIVION GATES Sheogorath! Hah! Watcha gonna do now?
Sheo: You do remember who you're fighting, right? As in specifically who in the universe you have decided to fuck with? And you go and try to use the exact same trick against me, again?
Okay, I can get behind this. Ah the nostalgia! I'mma gonna make some cool shit with those Oblivion runes, oh how I missed that let me tell you.
I love how you portray Sheogorath in this fic. You can put the god into the hero but you can't take the hero out of the god.
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I couldn't have put it better myself. This chapter was EPIC!
I am assuming the Daedra that is trying to screw around with Sheo's realm is a semi-avatar of Mehrunes Dagon?
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Glad you like his portrayal. I was a tad worried that he'd lose a bit of appeal when his more serious side came around.
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Possibly! I've tried to drop a few hints now and then while keeping their identity unrevealed. The answer will be showing up very soon.
1541473 Well mainly assuming him because of the gates... and I say semi-avatar, because if it was an avatar of his, I would assume him to go the 20 foot tall horned demon route he did in Cyrodill.
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It could be Boethiah.
Sheogorath said it uses lies and deceit, and that's kinda Boethiah's thing.
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Both excellent points. However, if you read the book Liminal Bridges from Oblivion (http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Lore:Liminal_Bridges) it mentions that such gates aren't exclusive to any one prince, but rather can be created by any of them through the use of a sigil stone, so while the gates might be Dagon's trademark, it doesn't necessarily mean it's him.
As far as appearance goes, why do you think he'd go with the giant form again? All it does is make him more of a target. Besides, the last time Dagon tried that, he got hamstrung by a guy the size of his hand. And the guy was mortal at that point!
1541576 True, but you never know, maybe he held a grudge against the ex-champion of cyrodill that became the next.... sheo.... I know I would if my plans of invasion were stopped due to one mortal, and another turned avatar for Akatosh.
This was so awesome, I'm just speechless
You can't beat Sheo, that guy's a player character
That was brilliant. Sheer brilliance, all around. I love your take an Sheogorath, and wonder what would happen if him, Discord, and Pinkie got together...
Dat chapter finally.
Not gonna lie here, there aren't many Elder Scrolls X MLP Crossovers, but this has easily been the best so far. I like what you did with Haskill, though I kinda have to agree with Sheo on the matter of why in the world does Dagon want Alduin so badly? Keep it up, I eagerly await more.
This is... surprisingly awesome. Seriously. I like this. A Skyrim/MLP Crossover I actually like. Are you SURE the world didn't end and this isn't the afterlife?
So much badass, my brain can't even orohiv vzhovkjas hvoc vidnucvivb shjovncjo. Fhtagn.
Thoroughly the best Elder Scrolls fanfic I've ever read, for Sheogorath riding a dragon alone.
...What do you mean, "ponies"?
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Fhtagn? Ia! Ia! Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!
Hmm, now THAT would be one messed up crossover.
1542728 Dear Princess Celestia,
Today, my friends and I visited the dread city R'lyeh...
If I could write for crap, I would write that story myself.
So...
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CUE EPIC MUSIC!
Oh my God, Sheogorath is now Zapp Brannigan. That's Priceless!
Great job, can't wait to see more!
One bright day in the middle of night
Two dead boys got up to fight
Back to back they faced each other
Drew their swords and shot each other
A def policeman heard the noise
and ran to save the two dead boys
And if you don't believe it's true,
go ask the blind man, he saw it to
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My grandmother taught me a different version of that poem.
One fine day, in the middle of the night,
Two dead boys got up to fight,
Back to back they faced each other,
Drew their swords and shot each other,
A deaf policeman heard the noise,
And came and caught those two dead boys.
As to the content of the story, I'm very impressed. Sheogorath is portrayed as Awesome and the Daedric Prince he fought was suitably dastardly. Maybe it's Molag Bol.
I do hope that the timeskips occur soon and bring us to Spike's POV as he discovers his true origin. I'd also like to see his arms grow into wings, but that's just personal preference.
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Glad you caught that reference! I always loved the timing of that line in the show, and thought it could work pretty well in this chapter.
Sheogorath riding a dragon.
This fic is beyond awesome right now. And it was most decidedly awesome before.
Okay, maybe I'm overdoing it a little, but this is still an excellent and read-worthy fic in my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I really like this story. I especially like the Twilight/Avatar of Akatosh bit, which neatly (in my humblest opinion) gives a reason behind Rapidash Twilight. But I do have a question will Twilight be able to speak Dovah? And I don't mean the Thu'um.
I can also only assume that pesky Dovahkin is going to be coming back at some point.
1542209 oh my gosh dude that would be a recipe for gigantic cupcakes, chaos, and madness. this idea is funny i like it
Did Sheogorath just do a rocket jump?
Given the...dislike the Daedra has for Alduin, I'll make a wild guess.
The Daedra is Mehrunes Dagon.