She seems bored lol. Love the chapter

God I feel so bad for her. I had to do similar shit when I was in the military and holy shit is it fucking depressingly boring if you're already tired to begin with.

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Personally, I think it's moving sand bags. I hated it.

Empress, huh? It's some really deep AU. Typical candidates for this title are out, as there is day and night. So it sound like Celestia just stopped pretending with her actual power here.

I have to keep reminding myself to have patience in the plot buildup.

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Chill, i wasn't trying to offend you.

So far this has been engaging, and the build up is going well. Gleamings character is being built up at a reasonable and believable pace. The only issue I have thus far is the two chapters. Why are there two? After rereading the first one and then this one back to back I feel like it would have been better to combine them into a single chapter. The first felt and reads more like a single scene that is immediately preceded or followed by another, rather than a standalone chapter. Aside from that admittedly small gripe, this is going well. And Empress... I might go half a dozen months before each visit to this site, but I don't think I've ever heard the Princess hold that title before. It will be interesting to see what you're doing with it.

Exhaustion LV.1: Disadvantage on ability checks.(including initiative)

Dear lord, I would've just quit at that point.

Is there gonna be more detail on the world setting in the next chapter?

Now this is quite the story to get behind! Gets right into it, develops quite well, enjoyable beyond belief, man it's all brilliant work! Definitely can't wait for more amazingness to come! I hope ya didn't mind, but I made a lil' reading for the Prologue and I hope ya don't mind of more chapters to possibly be read!

Audio Linky!~: https://youtu.be/3QDD2irngoM

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

It was so hard to read this I'm so tired I only slept 4 hours

What going on here?

Good so far

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HA
amateur

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How did I not know about this

Poor gender swap shining armor. 😔

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At least you're honest?

Dang I fell sorry for Gleaming ,I hope she gets a break soon.

Damn, I got tired just reading that.

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Immersion