Rex Rice survived on the Rimworld for two years. He believed that he would face adversity for the rest of his life, as the Rimworld see's to it that you fail. However, fate seems to have something else in store.
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Rimworld is an awesome game. I'm looking at all the tags and it brings back those memories where everything that could go wrong went wrong. I hope Rex and Twilight have infinity better luck then I had. (Thx Randy Random.)
Alright, this one caught my eye, and you delivered.
For a start, I'd say you did a fantastic job of translating the source material's world and mechanics into prose, especially for those who haven't delved into Rimworld. I'm looking forward to seeing more of that in future chapters, because I really do have to say it's better than most game-crossover introductions that opt for plopping down hard facts with far less tact. I also hope you take more liberties—like letting the generator run on both wood and chemfuel, and giving Rex flashlights—because some authors tend to forget to mix the source material with their creativity.
Pacing wise, I think you need to give yourself a little more credit! You packed a lot into these 2,500 words, and it wasn't jarring in the least. My only gripe here is that the personality for Rex is pretty lacking, even for an initial framework, but other than that, the development of the overall setting and mood is right as rain.
Interesting (popcorn and soda)
Tbh, I wished for this kind of cross-over a while now, and if half the tags of the story is any proof of it, then I can tell I am going to love what will come next. I don't think I can add much more than the previous comments, except maybe a little something, but I'll wait for the next chapter before stating, for I believe you'll address it.
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Rimworld is indeed an awesome game. I hope I can bring back more of those memories~!
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I'm glad you've enjoyed the first chapter!
Speaking of the wood and chemfuel, the funniest part is that I was thinking of that already! You're a mind reader. I'll be sure to take more creative liberties with the source material that is rimworld for sure.
I'm glad the pacing wasn't bad! I believe I can write decently well, but pacing is where most stories fail, so I'm happy that it was received well.
I can agree with the personality for rex, as it is lacking. I hope to expand that in the later chapters. In fact, Rex is based off my very first run of Rimworld years ago, though I did not base the story off of that playthrough. Only the name and appearance will be taken from it.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for giving some insight! 'Til the next chapter!
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Can I have some popcorn, perhaps?
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Prepare to strap in for a rollercoaster!
Thankfully, the tags fit perfectly with the universe of Rimworld. You'll definitely enjoy it.
'Til the next chapter!
Rimworld, yes!!!
Just looking at the first chapter I can tell this is going to be great, and I’m really excited for what is to come.
Will Rex and Twi go full war crimes? Will you force prisoners to eat without tables? Will they become go-juice addicts?
I can’t wait to find out. I am irrationally excited about this story, got Rimworld just 2 months ago and already pumped over 300 hours in with no signs of slowing down.
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Rimworld is truly one of the greatest games I've ever played! I'm glad I could write a story that you'll hopefully enjoy.
Stay safe on the Rim, brother.
'Til next chapter!
I only have one question what storyteller is this (my bet is Robbie Random) and what difficulty it is
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The story doesn't really run off of a difficulty.
However; i'm more or less basing it off of Savage/Merciless difficulty and Randy Random as the storyteller, if we were going off of the games logic.
'Til the next chapter!
really loved this and i look forward to reading the next chapter right now, also when i read his name "Rex" my Mind has gone to Rex from Star wars Lol
never expected to see a rimworld fic on here, as the game didnt seem the type.
boy was i wrong
980 hours on rimworld and counting
Rifle? Hmm... Must be a Ruger American Rifle or the M1903 Springfield (One of my favorite bolt-action rifles).
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Oh that poor man, Randy is a cruel bastard.
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Nah, in the game it's an Enfield No. 4