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Yay! New chapter!
Yay
trollestia is back ![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Wonder when Molestia is gonna make a appearence? :3
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Ugh... as for these things... Lemme have a looksie!
Yeah, I know that now, I didn't when I wrote this. So.. that's all good. And the 'great' isn't a new sentence, it was a continuation, so... yeah, it's been fixed more often that not in later chapters. I'm sure you've done that thing where you look back and go; "God... What did I write that for!?" Yeah, this is one of those times.
The commas, well, that's my style. I tend to do long sentences, in an awkward fashion, giving up too much info, all split apart with numerous, mostly out of place, commas - just like this sentence.
Hahaha! My Celestia, dude, I know the majority of people hate her. Me? I LOVE her. It sounds bad, oh so bad; but my Celestia is my favourite Celestia, hence I write her a lot - any chance I can. For some reason, the fans versins of Trollestia and Mollestia stuck with me, I just sought to combine them.
As for your chuckling; thank you! Glad you find some light in the bleak tunnel of evil darkness that is my story!
Reading, reading... more stylistic stuff. The one thing I would add here, is that, as I stated in the Aloe/Lotus chapter, I do sometimes purposefully misuse grammer and punctuation, more to do with the effects you can gain from it. Convensionally wrong, stylistically right.
With my adverb-ing... Dude, you have wounded me deeply, I hate that I often cannot find more ways to express it. I try, but, well... I fail on that one, true. There are so many times I really should consult a thesaurus...
And no, I like all comments, 'veriety' ones included. In fact, the ones that point out bad things, are often best.
Well... The last line? I can't get everything 100% ya'know. There are times, mainly at the end of chapters, where I do go; "Shit... gotta end this now..." And spam horrible words at the screen. It's a learning curve, I'll try and work on it. As you say; it may not be wrong, but awkwardness is a key point too, and I know sometimes my shit isn't east to read...
Anyhow, cheers for the comment, dude! aNything else that you notice, let me know. You take it easy too!
P.S. I have been drinking again, sorry if any of this is tricky to understand or read...
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Trollestia? Well, Miss Mollestitrollestia is something I always wonder about... There is something about keeping her 'mollestiness' on the verge but never tipping it over the edge. I'd hate to put something between them at some point...
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I HAVE to include her! She's my favourite!
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Once again. Applogies for anything incomprehensible - blame the alcahol.
Definately on my favorites for a reason.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1187497 or is it molestia? hmmmm
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Thanks! I aim to please!
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Some concoction of both.
Dang son, you are really pumping these chapters out, keep up the good work! I em loving this story~
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Haha, I'm cheating! I've already written all of these ones!
But... I do hate to disappoint ya, we're getting close to what I've written, soon you'll have to wait!
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boo :l
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Yeah... My bad!
sooo... the wardrobe in the wall has another room in it? i would have went in there and seen how long it takes them to find me.
then again they needed to be somewhere. ![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
why doesn't he ever voice his commentaries out loud, no use being sarcastic if no ones around to hear you scream
nice chapter by the way![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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It pretty much has another room in it, seeing as it's so big, but it's really just a fucking huge wardrobe. You know how it works; 'magic and shit'.
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That's... That's a very good question. To be honest, I figured that this way, I can be as rude and sarcastic as I need, without any negative consequenses. If things are voiced, then the chanced are I'll have to explain them to somepony, and Arc is all about making friends <sarcasm>. So all in all, except for the odd comment, the safe option when around a bunch of naieve lil' ponies is to just shut up.
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Amusingly, Fidget is sitting on my lap right now. Equestria is not a place for her; besides, she'd never get on with Opal.
That is actually a quote in itself, you have quoted a quote; Well done. Somewhere in the earlier comments, I told someone about how I liked music and including referances and lyrics into the chapters, that is a good example of such a time.
Celestia being the voice inside his head... Tch, it might as well be Sheogorath or Discord, she seems to be as chaotic as them.
lol when dash made that sex comment my first thought was you going to make a dirty comment back and get raped again.
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