Page generated in 0.023 seconds
Total duration
892 users online
1,408,716 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Right, I'm bored so...
People who do know me, you'll know that I like my music. I'm a metalhead at heart and this story will reflect that in some ways. For those who don't know me... well. That.
The main thing is this, before changing all the chapter names, I simply give them the name of a song I love at that moment in time, so, just for fun trivia, here are the original chapter titles:
Chapter 1: Secret Tragic Fiction - InMe.
Chapter 2: Just a Glimpse - InMe.
Chapter 3: Bury Me Deep Beneath Your Skin - InMe
---Seems to be a running trend now that I look at it...---
Chapter 4: Into The Mouth Of Hell We March - Trivium. (I kept this title, as it seemed appropriate.)
Chapter 5: The Right To Go Insane - Megadeth.
Chapter 6: Never Dead - Megadeth.
Chapter 7: Stone Carved Eyes - Communic.
Chapter 8: Warmness on the Soul - Avenged Sevenfold.
Chapter 9: Once Kissed by the Serpent (Twice Bitten by Truth) - Trail of Tears.
Chapter 10: In Waves - Trivium.
Chapter 11: Drowned and Torn Asunder - Trivium.
Chapter 12: Birthright - Celldweller.
Chapter 13: Mr. Sinister - Powerwolf.
(I'm pretty sure all/most of you will despise that music, haha!)
So, there's that. Otherwise. I thought I'd add some things that are different between me in real life, and Arc as a character, one again, just for funzies:
Number 1:
I am far more sceptical in the story than I am in real life. I'm more closed minded, so that my character doesn't adapt to the whole 'magic' thing too quickly.
Number 2:
My character in the story likes big boobs. In real life, I have no preference in size.
Number 3:
In real life I am FANTASTIC with directions. I'm really good at all that shit, and yet, in my story, I'm forever getting lost.
Number 4:
In real life, I am impartial to fezzes. Whereas in the story fez = death.
Number 5:
In real life, I need to sleep in bed, or at least in a comfortable place. In my story however, I seem to never sleep where I'm supposed to.
Number 6:
In real life, I don’t forget things when I drink heavily. In the story, I seem to…
So yeah, once again. Comments and love please! I welcome... well, anything really!
Oh yeah, and if anyone finds mistakes, PLEASE let me know. I do this without proofreading... because... well, I'm impatient. I double check and edit my own stuff, but I definatelly don't catch everything.
Thanks again!
Nice reference to Skyrim that is a reference to the Hangover. Super reference!!!
That was a really entertaing chapter! Alcohol might not make life easier but sure makes it funner.
1423922
Haha, yup! I do like my references! Shame people don't usually get them! Kudos for that!
I do like to set aside a good week or so, to lock all my doors, and play Skyrim non-stop!
1423923
Oh, dude. Alcahol makes life a good... 300% more funny. And thank you, glad you enjoyed it! I actually only had about 3,000 words written 2 days ago... Somehow shit got done really fast once I set my mind to it!
YAY UPDATE
1424030
YAY COMMENTER
This chapter remind me a lot of "The Hangover"
By the way, I almost expected him to call Celestia in late night, tring to hit on her
1424041
Where were you when I was writing this!? I woulda thrown it in! Aaagh!
Haha, I asked so many people for ideas on this chapter. And my favourite by far, was watching me and 2 other Skype friends act out the Lion King theme tune. Many funzies. We're bad at singing...
And yeah, The Hangover wasn't inspiration or anything, just something which I knew this chapter was going to be similar to! Haha, alongside the Skyrim quest for Sanguine, which 1423922 spoke about above.
1424059
Oh you, don't made me feel so important
1424084
Haha, my bad! I'll try to make you feel more... worthless? Next time!
Naah, I couldn't do that!
I can totally see Vinyl doing that, shes my fav char and im SO stoked to see her appear in your story!! Nice bit with Luna too, she needs to come out of her shell a bit lol
1427138
Well, I always intended Vinyl to play a fairly large part in all of this, so, yeah! I'm not 100% sure I wrote her right... but, it's a learning curve! And I did enjoy it! I hope you stick around to see, 'The Adventures of Arc and Vinyl' or... something to that effect! There will be music!
And I'm actually happy with my Luna. She has that, 'adapting to modern life' feel, while still acting somewhat archaic. She's torn between acting regal and responsible, and having fun and joining in with the others! It's why she sometimes doesn't get the jokes or thinks she's funny when she's not!
Although, personally, I think writing on his chest was pretty funny. I have my friend Kintra to thank for that one!
That one bit made me think of this
chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/01/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-share-the-magic.jpg
1427892
Haha, yup!
Although, that might be a tad redundant in Ponyville!
I might try swapping it around. "Excuse me, do you have the time to fit a human into your life?"
Her eyes were a grassy green colour and she has a sweet smile. - Tense error, has should be had.
Faint memories had begun to come back to them sporadically, and on the walk back, Rob had found what was left of Vinyl’s shades in his back pocket. She was not happy about that.- you never mentioned getting clothes again… Magic pants?
He looked at the pink maned mane, along with all the others.- Yea….
Aside from those, we have the dreaded hangover! None the less! We have ourselves some wonderful vinyl interaction though ive noticed you didn't describe her voice. I'm always on the look out for voice descriptions. They never happen though. D: Let's see. To be honest I remember most of this chapter from our conversations, and I have to admit im right there with Luna. I'da written that on your back and then let you out for the night. Because, on one hand I like you and want you to remain safe, on the other you were a complete drunken ass-hat and I didn't want to deal with you.
*Sigh* Imma be over here wishing I could be with Luna. Damn it all.
Also, if I named my chapters over songs I was listening to.
Well. "You'll rebel to anything (As long as it's not challenging)" Is an interesting title. xD
nice work on the chapter bro that lion king thing killed me
1429826
1430093
1430256
Thanks a buch, dude. Love the comments like this! They help, get the imagination going and all sorts! Seriously; thank you!
Anyhow, as for the typos, they're fixed, cheers for pointing them out.
You know I love you for all the ideas you help me with!
You have permission to cuddle my Luna too.
Right; the pet thing! An idea I really like, aside from one thing which involves the future of this story. It's not too long now, before I gain just the kind of people I can speak my mind to. You know who I'm talking about~ So, a pet is still a good idea, but god knows about the integration of it. We can discuss this on Skype at some time! The concept of bitching at stuff to get no response though is good, and I like it.
Hehe, you'd drink at my parties, eh? Didn't expect that! One lager shandy coming right up, we wouldn't want you drinking too much now, would we...
And yeah, you know me. You also know Arc. Slow dancing? I... really don't think that would happen! Tell you what - YOU can slow dance her at some point, and I'll continue to be an asshat and pawn her off on other people! Deal?
Lack of Redheart... yeah, I know. I wanted her to be there, but... didn't know how much I could add in with her. Besides, I see her as being one of the more sensible ponies there!
Moving on!
Nope. Not magic pants. We can just assume that after being stripped, he did put the clothes back on at some point. Remember that in the beginning I said he was missing underwear. Well... they obviously escaped. Turns out that after the stripping, he might not have found all of his clothes again.
You make a good point about the voices though. It's been added to the notebook! If it makes you feel better, I imagine her to have a fairly energised accent most of the time, but a surprisingly girly voice when she manages to queten down - a voice she's not too proud of having.
And yup! Drunken asshat! That's me! And yeah, this was an example of Luna trying out a joke, and it actually working, while being nice and safety conscious at the same time! Double win!
Anyhow, as I said. Thanks for the comments and stuff! Speak to you later, dude!
1430303
It made us piss ourselves when we were thinking it up, too! Very funny!
Glad you liked the chapter, dude! Thanks for reading!
fucking sweeet!!!! that chapter man...
1443806
Thanks! I always have a conflict of how professional a chapter is, how well written it is, and how important it is. Persoanlly, I thought I was lacking on all of them this time round! On the bright side? I enjoyed writing it majorly!
So, thanks for the vote of confidence, dude! Glad you enjoyed it!
Messaging for lulzies.
1546818
Replying for equal amounts of lulzies.
seriously?
Please update soon!
1646736
Sorry, I'm getting there.
If it makes you feel any better, I'm on 15,000 words so far for the next chapter... it's just taking a while! My bad!
And ask anyone who knows me... College, assignments, work placements... yeah, I'm sorta busy.
But have no fear, it is coming!
thanks :)
My body is ready. Bring on the next chapter!
AAAAI SUNVENGA
....that gets me everytime! XD