The big day is fast approaching, and Star is conducting her final rounds, checking in on each of her friends to make sure that everything is perfect, and having a little fun as she goes.
Excellent as always. That said, this chapter (Decorations 3) felt disjointed compared to the laser focus of the others. Rainbow accidentally goes outside the bounds of her conditioning and AJ is suddenly self-aware, but it's all ok because Fluttershy is in charge now? I had to reread just to try organizing in my head. Again, the altered personalities for the situation are perfect, but the situations here were difficult to follow.
10957838 Arg! Sounds like my eyes might have been a bit bigger than my stomach on this one. Really appreciate your honesty, and I’m glad you enjoyed it enough to put the effort in <3
AJ isn't aware, I'm pretty sure. The thoughts that she was just going along with it for now were planted in her head as part of Fluttershy turning her into a pet.
10958078 Don't get me wrong, the interactions between them all are still perfect, and I'm really looking forward to the big party. The first half of this chapter with Dash just felt random.
Power dynamics aren't usually my thing, but that was very well done indeed. (And Dash's ego bleeding through was honestly hilarious.) Looking forward to seeing what else is on Starlight's checklist.
10973423 "I generally don't like 'X', but you did alright with it" Is always one of my favourite compliments! We're getting pretty low on the checklist at this point, but still lots of fun left!
This chapter was pretty great overall.
Still kinda mixed on the whole role reversal thing between Dash and Shy, but I'm looking forward to seeing when Dash is put back in control.
Can't wait to see what's next.
I was surprised Dash didn't get directly dominated by Star after her outburst, but it was worth the scene with Fluttershy at the end.
Can't wait to get some more hypno though!
I love seeing fluttershy in charge like this and honestly I would love to see more of it.
Excellent as always. That said, this chapter (Decorations 3) felt disjointed compared to the laser focus of the others. Rainbow accidentally goes outside the bounds of her conditioning and AJ is suddenly self-aware, but it's all ok because Fluttershy is in charge now? I had to reread just to try organizing in my head. Again, the altered personalities for the situation are perfect, but the situations here were difficult to follow.
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<3 thanks!
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Yes! Detours are fun (glad you found something to like in this one!) but we'll be all in on mind control for the home stretch.
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I love that you love it! And you will almost certainly see at least a little bit more before we're done here.
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Arg! Sounds like my eyes might have been a bit bigger than my stomach on this one. Really appreciate your honesty, and I’m glad you enjoyed it enough to put the effort in <3
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AJ isn't aware, I'm pretty sure. The thoughts that she was just going along with it for now were planted in her head as part of Fluttershy turning her into a pet.
Hey, it's still fun.
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Don't get me wrong, the interactions between them all are still perfect, and I'm really looking forward to the big party. The first half of this chapter with Dash just felt random.
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That makes a lot more sense.
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Having fun is job one!
Power dynamics aren't usually my thing, but that was very well done indeed. (And Dash's ego bleeding through was honestly hilarious.) Looking forward to seeing what else is on Starlight's checklist.
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"I generally don't like 'X', but you did alright with it" Is always one of my favourite compliments! We're getting pretty low on the checklist at this point, but still lots of fun left!