The big day is fast approaching, and Star is conducting her final rounds, checking in on each of her friends to make sure that everything is perfect, and having a little fun as she goes.
This feels, out of place. It's not a bad chapter, but it feels very at odds with the rest of the story. Celestia has no apparent reason to distrust Starlight so much given how she's been behaving very well, and was willing to impart more trust onto her own sister, who probably did MUCH more damage, and freaking Discord.
That said, I'm curious to see where this goes, if only to see if there's an explanation coming.
11287688 Yeahhhhhh, one of the joys of starting at the very end is that defining who relates to whom and how becomes a bit tricky. I was kinda' hoping that alluding to it being the case would do the job, but either way we are where we are. Onward and lewd-ward!
“I promise you, Luna. Everything is going to go to plan.” Those perfect, trusting eyes. “Twilight’s coronation will be everything she deserves. You trust me, don’t you?”
Well either they're already hypnotized or she IS about to make her delusional evil speech.
This feels, out of place. It's not a bad chapter, but it feels very at odds with the rest of the story. Celestia has no apparent reason to distrust Starlight so much given how she's been behaving very well, and was willing to impart more trust onto her own sister, who probably did MUCH more damage, and freaking Discord.
That said, I'm curious to see where this goes, if only to see if there's an explanation coming.
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Yeahhhhhh, one of the joys of starting at the very end is that defining who relates to whom and how becomes a bit tricky. I was kinda' hoping that alluding to it being the case would do the job, but either way we are where we are. Onward and lewd-ward!
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If they aren't then Star is taking an awfully big risk pitting her magic against theirs 0_0
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Indeed. I have faith that everything will make sense Eventually(TM).
hmm ... this looks interesting.
Oh, and OiM has had some updates since page one of the comments. Right now it's Fim:C that seems dead.
Probably my favorite line in the chapter.
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A very interesting choice
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Well, hopefully I can fill the gaps in until either update <3
I'm honestly surprised that Celestia never just dropped the preamble and vaporized Starlight herself if she was this (rightfully) distrusting.
You've set up quite the pledge. I can only imagine what the turn and prestige will entail. (Also, I do appreciate tanned Celestia and pale Luna.)
hmm ... waiting for the other three shoes ...
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Hopefully not waiting too much longer! {Time is at a bit of a premium for now, but I've got eyes on this still}