The big day is fast approaching, and Star is conducting her final rounds, checking in on each of her friends to make sure that everything is perfect, and having a little fun as she goes.
11431267 I'm biased toward letting her fall into a sense of security and not having any idea anything is off or unusual, while doing things to cause further downfall and/or just do sexy stuff unawares.
11431380 You and I are on the same wavelength there. Unawareness fun will be pretty prominent for the next little while, but if you've got anything specific in mind, feel free to PM me.
11431721 Ehhhhhhh, soft yes? Strictly speaking, shorter chapters should mean more chapters at a faster clip, but a lot of how quickly I publish also revolves around externalities and will, so I don't want to say 'yes' definitively... Sorry that I can't give a more satisfying answer
The new 'Guest of Honor' actually made me laugh out loud. "Serious face, serious Princess, I have you now villain" *Face-plants the cake* As much I enjoy some good drama, the venomous anger of the previous version felt very sudden. The new humor is great, and don't be afraid to add some of the dramatic bits, but those need more of a build-up to feel natural.
11432011 This chapter was meant to be *twice* as serious as the previous one, and the fact that you laughed at what was meant to be the dramatic climax has shattered my fragile little heart into a million pieces :'(
The question of how Starlight pulled this off remains, but I prefer this more subtle approach to the previous version. (And once you have one sister...) Looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
More than that. Taking a good look at this chapter's ending; Celestia's first action when she is "in control" is to move her hands behind her head, effectively stretching her front chest wide open, and then going with a sensual body to table contact. Followed by more stuff.
Starlight Is playing with an already tranced Celestia.
11614800 That is certainly a possibility... though I cannot say for sure. You should have more evidence to draw your own conclusions soon, hopefully very soon.
I quite like how ominous this chapter is. We know something isn't right, and we can take a guess as to what, but exactly what is unknown.
Love the direction this took. That Starlight’s a tricky one, Celly will need to watch for any little thing out of the ordinary!
So much better.
The complete cliffhanger that this one ends on ... I want to see the next chapter.
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Eyyyy, progress! I'm glad to have piqued your interest.
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Celly's a pretty smart cookie. As long as she keeps a clear head I'm sure she'll be fine.
Interesting decision to change direction, but I like it
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Thanks! I'm hoping that we can have a bit of fun following along while Celestia tries to piece things together.
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I'm biased toward letting her fall into a sense of security and not having any idea anything is off or unusual, while doing things to cause further downfall and/or just do sexy stuff unawares.
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You and I are on the same wavelength there. Unawareness fun will be pretty prominent for the next little while, but if you've got anything specific in mind, feel free to PM me.
Will shorter chapters mean we can expect more frequent updates?
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Ehhhhhhh, soft yes? Strictly speaking, shorter chapters should mean more chapters at a faster clip, but a lot of how quickly I publish also revolves around externalities and will, so I don't want to say 'yes' definitively... Sorry that I can't give a more satisfying answer
The new 'Guest of Honor' actually made me laugh out loud. "Serious face, serious Princess, I have you now villain" *Face-plants the cake* As much I enjoy some good drama, the venomous anger of the previous version felt very sudden. The new humor is great, and don't be afraid to add some of the dramatic bits, but those need more of a build-up to feel natural.
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This chapter was meant to be *twice* as serious as the previous one, and the fact that you laughed at what was meant to be the dramatic climax has shattered my fragile little heart into a million pieces :'(
(Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!)
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I mean, the two are not mutually exclusive. There is drama with the unrealized control, but... FACE-CAKE!
The question of how Starlight pulled this off remains, but I prefer this more subtle approach to the previous version. (And once you have one sister...) Looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
Hmm ... these are not the pony versions that would normally do a mouth eat like that.
These are humans, right? As in, forks normally?
Yeah, just rechecked. Forks last chapter, and direct mouth now. Clearly claiming "no one else coming" last chapter, and now just "a scheduling error".
Starlight already made her move on Celestia then ...
More than that. Taking a good look at this chapter's ending; Celestia's first action when she is "in control" is to move her hands behind her head, effectively stretching her front chest wide open, and then going with a sensual body to table contact. Followed by more stuff.
Starlight Is playing with an already tranced Celestia.
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They're written as human, but you're more than welcome to imagine them however you'd like ;)
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That is certainly a possibility... though I cannot say for sure. You should have more evidence to draw your own conclusions soon, hopefully very soon.