Oh that was actually sad right there. I was all thinking something goofy was gonna happen, then real life popped in my head and figured that, "Yup this is what would happen if you publicly humiliated someone.". Good stuff
I like this so far. My brain isnt forming any corrections or criticism at the moment. I'm gonna track this for now and leave ya with a like. Cant wait to see where you take this
Don't let it get to Lyra's ears he's willing if it is only romance intended. He might wake up tied to a chair in front of a candlelight dinner as her unwilling hostage/date.
Yeah, um... If you call the prospect of sex between two people bestiality, then you are implying one of them is an animal (and in the subhuman/untermensch/owning_them_is_okay meaning, rather than the fun one) and that every person who look like them is also an animal (and again, not in the fun meaning of that term.)
Ladies and gentlemen, our lead character.
Alternatively, you might really be missing a word in that sentence. Possibly 'considdered'...
The artist is Ponut Joe.
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THANK YOU. CREDITED HAS BEEN ADDED.
You could also add thé RGR tag.
Cute so far. I look forward to reading more.
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RGR?
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THANK YOU :3
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Reversed gender roles
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I thought it was RGRE
Cute story. Just a bit of criticism, you have some repetitive/redundant sentences, particularly near the beginning.
THIS HAS GIVEN ME THE GUFFAWS.
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Well I glad it made you laugh. XD
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NOT RGRE ENOUGH
It's never RGRE Enough
WHELP. I wasn't thinking this get lot of attention....
GUESS I AM MAKING CHAPTER TWO TOMORROW.
"He then decided, 'Fuck it,' and made wet, squelchy love to the purple princess on her front door, in view of everypony."
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Rgre truly is the way
Dirty Horse Box LOL!
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I have a good feeling about this.
Should be brakes. Few others here and there but nothing to really ruin anything. That one just jumped out at me and went for the ankle.
Good story so far and I'm interested in seeing where it goes. Twilight shouldn't be crying, she got his long and thick hose to spray on her.
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Oh my!
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I can associate only one fact with that image...
Oh that was actually sad right there.
I was all thinking something goofy was gonna happen, then real life popped in my head and figured that, "Yup this is what would happen if you publicly humiliated someone.".
Good stuff
Okay, this was funny and kinda sweet at the end there. I like that it isn't just mean spirited just for the sake of being mean spirited.
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Well thank you. I plan on writing more soon. :3
Great start. I look forward to shenanigans
I like this so far. My brain isnt forming any corrections or criticism at the moment. I'm gonna track this for now and leave ya with a like. Cant wait to see where you take this
Don't let it get to Lyra's ears he's willing if it is only romance intended. He might wake up tied to a chair in front of a candlelight dinner as her unwilling hostage/date.
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Mother of god...your right. Marks down Chapter idea
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Just got through watching Beauty and the Beast before reading this. Stockholm Syndrome is 'A tale as old as time.'
Impressive...... Can't wait to see what you got planned for this story. It has a lot of potential in my opinion.
Rarity would be adorable trying to woo Anon.
1st day in equestria and i would have caved in!
I'm like this story so far can't wait to see where it will go.
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And thats why you need to get in the box
Everyday mood.
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You weren't sure who the artist was yet you called your character "an average Joe".
You knew who the artist was the whole time! You just didn't know it. But you did.
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GET IN THE BOX.
Hmm this is not a comparative, maybe doh-yer or more doh-y
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This needs to be made a reality
Yeah, um... If you call the prospect of sex between two people bestiality, then you are implying one of them is an animal (and in the subhuman/untermensch/owning_them_is_okay meaning, rather than the fun one) and that every person who look like them is also an animal (and again, not in the fun meaning of that term.)
Ladies and gentlemen, our lead character.
Alternatively, you might really be missing a word in that sentence. Possibly 'considdered'...