"Applejack. I know I turned you down but, would you…." He couldn't believe what he was about to ask her. "Kiss you?" I think this came out a little wrong since he is asking her to kiss herself. I don't know if this edit applies, but... "Applejack. I know I turned you down but, would it be ok if I…." He couldn't believe what he was about to ask her. "Kiss you?"
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"Why are you so against being with a Pony? I don't mean that to be disrespectful but, I think knowing may help me understand." Her tone was gentle or as gentle as she could sound at least.
Because he isn't a pony himself, and prefers those of his own species. There are MANY species 8n this world, and they obviously each have their own preferences. Ponies aren't something unique and special to the point that every race should look to them in particular as desirable over their oen choice in partners.
Really, the only pony so far that can be considered his friend is Applejack because of her respeting his choices and not trying to force him. If hecwas attracted to ponies, I'd say date her. Given he isn't attracted to them and is just being emotionally exploited, he should just tell the ponoes who are pursuing him that if they do not respect gis choices, then they are bot his friends. A romantic relationship should never be without consent of both individuals, so he shouldn't go crawling back to Twilight and Rarity.
I bet his next thought is Screw everypony!
IT RETURNS!!!
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"Applejack. I know I turned you down but, would you…." He couldn't believe what he was about to ask her. "Kiss you?"
I think this came out a little wrong since he is asking her to kiss herself. I don't know if this edit applies, but...
"Applejack. I know I turned you down but, would it be ok if I…." He couldn't believe what he was about to ask her. "Kiss you?"
Harem when?
But seriously, looking forward to where this fun little story goes.
Good luck out running Rainbow Dash
Applejack doesn't have blue eyes...
Do we have a changeling trying to sneak some love from the exotic human here?
Please keep up the good work!
Are you wondering what he's planning?
We'll find out in four months.
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There is reason a man shouldn't write a chapter in wee hours of the night. I fixed both of those mistake.
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GONNA NEED YOU ALSO STOP LOOKING AT MY STORY NOTES. THE HAREM WILL BE STRONG.
Because he isn't a pony himself, and prefers those of his own species. There are MANY species 8n this world, and they obviously each have their own preferences. Ponies aren't something unique and special to the point that every race should look to them in particular as desirable over their oen choice in partners.
Really, the only pony so far that can be considered his friend is Applejack because of her respeting his choices and not trying to force him. If hecwas attracted to ponies, I'd say date her. Given he isn't attracted to them and is just being emotionally exploited, he should just tell the ponoes who are pursuing him that if they do not respect gis choices, then they are bot his friends. A romantic relationship should never be without consent of both individuals, so he shouldn't go crawling back to Twilight and Rarity.
This was good. Seriously, take your time and don't rush it.
The fuck is wrong with this guy, is he bipolar or something?
I don't think I've laughed this hard in years.
Is he okay?
...nope
Boi you're lucky I was just cleaning out some tracking stories
So far so good. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
Lol.
Moar!
Good answer
DANG IT!! FINALLY!! AN UPDATE!! LOVE YA!!
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