Twilight's mom would make an excellent Mare in the Shower. Except she wouldn't have missed... Death by Shampoo. Embarrassing way to die, but a great name for a Hair Metal band! ...I'll see myself out. Loving the story so far!
Asian dude at a school desk:" Ha! GAAYY-EEEEE!" You really need a proof-reader, bud. Spellcheck does ONLY that: check your spelling. It doesn't tell you if you're using the correct words for the sentence or if you're missing a word.
10134656 Oh my, how embarrassing! your right that one missing word does makes that sentence sound pretty gay. Fixed! Thanks for spotting that. You've got a sharp eye, I have considered finding myself a proof-reader, but I'm afraid I don't write frequently enough to keep one busy.
Twilight's mom would make an excellent Mare in the Shower.
Except she wouldn't have missed... Death by Shampoo.
Embarrassing way to die, but a great name for a Hair Metal band!
...I'll see myself out. Loving the story so far!
Asian dude at a school desk:" Ha! GAAYY-EEEEE!"
You really need a proof-reader, bud. Spellcheck does ONLY that: check your spelling. It doesn't tell you if you're using the correct words for the sentence or if you're missing a word.
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Oh my, how embarrassing! your right that one missing word does makes that sentence sound pretty gay.
Fixed! Thanks for spotting that. You've got a sharp eye, I have considered finding myself a proof-reader, but I'm afraid I don't write frequently enough to keep one busy.
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Or luna
Heck celestia would work as it means he caused her to be late