Earlier that day you questioned your life decisions (perticualy the career choice of becoming an assassin) as you walked into the shadiest establishment ponyvile had to offer The Rusty Bucket.
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And you were going to show all of Equestria just what you could realy do!
Great first chapter. Only thing of note though is that
Should be "Cheerilee".
Other than that, 👍
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