10125945 Actual mistakes, or an exaggerated country drawl? Some of the dialogue in the first chapter is grammatically incorrect in order to reflect a rural upbringing.
I don't expect everyone to enjoy this story, but if there are misspelled words please point them out so I can fix them.
10125969 Found a couple of someponies with missing e's and a deadpanned with only one n But I feel like there's something I might be missing, maybe you could point it out?
Why would Luna choose him if he's so bumbling?
10125102
Because this is a comedy, and that was a joke.
11 down votes 0 complaints I can't fix it if ya don't tell me what I'm doing wrong.
Come on lay it on me I can take it
10125132
Well, the first chapter needs to be fixed due to grammar errors and such. I haven't given a dislike though.
10125328
The first chapter is pretty awful. I often consider rewriting it. Does my writing seem to improve in the later chapters?
10125611
What? Really? My French is terrible I had to do extensive research to make sure that was right, and even then i wasnt shure.
yeah.. i would read this but there are too many spelling mistakes in the first chapter.
10125945
Actual mistakes, or an exaggerated country drawl?
Some of the dialogue in the first chapter is grammatically incorrect in order to reflect a rural upbringing.
I don't expect everyone to enjoy this story, but if there are misspelled words please point them out so I can fix them.
10125959
actual mistakes, yeah
10125969
Found a couple of someponies with missing e's and a deadpanned with only one n
But I feel like there's something I might be missing, maybe you could point it out?
10125375
It does seem to be better.
I look forward to more, if there will be
10128059
I'm no quiter I'm gonna finish this!
10127840
Better but not great. Not yet anyways, I'll need to keep practicing if I want to get better.
Just read the first chapter, and so far I'm loving this character! Nice work.
10134694
It's a problem a lot of people have, whether english is a first or second language, and no matter how long it's studied.
There are definitely mistakes, especially in the first chapter, but they get less as the story goes on.