10161144 I'm currently rereading the story in its entirety, searching for any loose ends that need tying up in the short epilogue I plan to write. But don't worry I'll switch it over to complete once it's published. I can think of few things more annoying than an incomplete story that the author was too lazy to Finnish.
10162559 You know what, I think I can do that for you. I was going to stop reading this story outright but, you asks... and that is a lot more than most would do and I applaud you for that. Whether my critique of your story is good or bad you had the fucking balls to ask for it, and as far as I'm concerned that deserves praise.
10162570 Uhh.. thank you I think? As much as I would appreciate your feed back, you don't really have to finish the story if you don't want to. But I am still interested in any advice that would make my stories more enjoyable in the future.
Looked through the first six chapters, fixed a bunch of errors, it's still not perfect but at least its tidier.
You should mark this as complete by the way. Unless your gonna do a epilogue.
10161144
I'm currently rereading the story in its entirety, searching for any loose ends that need tying up in the short epilogue I plan to write.
But don't worry I'll switch it over to complete once it's published.
I can think of few things more annoying than an incomplete story that the author was too lazy to Finnish.
10162559
You know what, I think I can do that for you. I was going to stop reading this story outright but, you asks... and that is a lot more than most would do and I applaud you for that. Whether my critique of your story is good or bad you had the fucking balls to ask for it, and as far as I'm concerned that deserves praise.
10162570
Uhh.. thank you I think? As much as I would appreciate your feed back, you don't really have to finish the story if you don't want to. But I am still interested in any advice that would make my stories more enjoyable in the future.