Hatred runs rampant in the chaos of Anon-A-Miss, demon-like creatures are on the prowl in Canterlot City, and Sunset is the only one with the power to cut them all down...
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Oh wow, I did not see that coming. I thought, with the whole Horse thing earlier, that maybe one or both of them were having sex with the horses or something, but not that.
You shoulda seen my face.
O.0
That was...something?
Oh Gods No! I think I see where this is going!
...Well, can't say I was expecting *that* particular twist.
Regardless, glad to see you back! Eagerly awaiting the next one
WTF?! WHAT THE HELL?
Wow. Just wow.
*Wink,Wink nudge,nudge.* Eh, say nomore. say nomore.
MacJack.......
Did not see that coming.
LOLOLOL!!! 😂
Oh man I TOTALLY wasn't expecting that.
I read this and started laughing out loud, people around me probably thought I was out of my mind.
So that's what you meant by forbidden fruits.
Good deal.
That's what happens when you live on a semi-isolated farm.
What would Bulk Biceps turn into if he got possessed by a windigo, King Kong?
Hopefully. With Applejack's support later, Anon a Miss will lose some power.
Honestly Sunset I'm asking myself the same question. Just what the hell have you stumbled onto?
The fuck did you stumble apon this time sunset
Well damn just damn
Now..... If applebloom finds out about this, will she willingly out her brother and sister? I wanna think that she wouldn't but... decision juddgement falls very short in these anonymous stories
Not a fan of incest here.
If you all think this is bad, then do yourselves a favor: Do not look up Twilight and her brother; Shining Armor, on Derpibooru. You have been warned.
Anyways, judging by the title, if there is no gold involved in this case, I'm going to be disappointed.
The warning at the start made me think it was going to be something like with RD and Lightning Dust. I expected something, anything. Perhaps something with the horses given the mention of RD's jokes, maybe Sunset reminiscing about Equestria due time around something that bears superficial similarity with what she once was. Incest was not it. Incest was definitely not it.
This is gonna end poorly no matter what Sunset does, isn't it?
Regarding that last little bit of the chapter… I didn't see that particular twist. I've got… hypotheses about what's going on. I'll wait until things progress before they're confirmed or refuted, but I've got hypotheses.
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yeah there are way too many incest crap on these sights.
So nothing against incest but please tell me this won't be a thing between the two again nothing against it but please PLEASE tell me this isn't going to be an actually thing
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Glad some of you saw the poeticness of the chapter title and what happened in the chapter. Your reactions are just as I thought they'd be when i decided to post that chapter, but let me go ahead and put some of you at ease as I know some of you aren't into the incest shiick.
No shame, i know, it ain't everyone's cup of tea, but I hope you can power through it for the Midas Cases.
First off, the incest is mainly something to setup for something bigger down the line. You'll see next week, and since this is my first mature story - don't count the other one i did, if anything I need to change that rating - I'm kinda pushing the envelope here. Plus, the next arc after Midas is going to be kinda raunchy...yeah, not holding back on that one.
Anyway, again, to those of you who aren't fans of incest you needn't read those bits if you don't want to, if anyone would like me to put a kind of flag in the chapters to indicate when a sex scene is going to start and end, go ahead and tell me, I won't be offended. I know most of you are here for sexy, skimpy armor Sunset cutting up demons.
And the story, of course.
Well, till next time!
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Heh, no sweat for me. I have an inkling on where you're going with this but I'll keep my theories to myself for now. Regarding the sexy/raunchy content, I feel a flag/warning at the beginning is good enough (then again the story's already tagged mature), but I'll leave that up to you.
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Honestly am fine with it as long as it not to much and I think the content warning at the beginning is fine enough
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No swet, as long as it's handeld whit care I see no problem.
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No worries. It was just surprising because I've never read anything like it in an Anon-A-Miss based story.
Sure it's not really my cup of tea but if it helps to propel the plot in some way then by all means...
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I think you should change the rating if there is going to be more, *ehm* interesting things.
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Well it not my cup of tea as well so to speak. but that not what bothers me so much.
It just.....Did it have to be a cliche of sorts? I mean Apple Jack and Big Mac...how do i explain this.
I'll be blunt feels like a cliche big time I'm Sorry, but yeah....
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Eh' no worries, no shade bein' thrown here chief. I just need to see how this plays out before I cast any storytelling critiques.
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DAMN. did not see that coming
yee-haw
Hey I noticed two possible continuity errors in this chapter
In Chapter 2-3 (the Harpy) you stated that she was fired from her sushi job.
The second one is Sunset's physicality.
While not all physicality is designed for long endurance work like on a farm, it has been commented that Sunset is muscular.
That's excluding how Sunset is able to kick ass before she got the Witchblade. Examples being when Pinkie was mugged and that flashback where Sunset and Rainbow had to beat up some guys right a little bit after the friendship laser.
Trial
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We are two my geo equine friend
I am worried for Celestia.
I love vulgar human Pinkie, her dirty jokes are always fun in stories.
He have a good point.
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WHAT THE HELL 🤢
What is wrong with you ?!
You need bleach, i need bleach, everyone need bleach after seeing this abomination