I like Pinkie Pie. Pinkie's the best pony. :D
Why? I'm a happy party pony. Lots of friends. Sweets, and everything I can ever ask for? But I feel really, really sad... I'm swirling into the deep, dark cycle... Why? Who can help me? I feel lonely. I need somepony who can help. oh, link to template:
http://ejwolfgirl.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Nuzzle-Base-287144503
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gotta love creepy dreams
aaaaaawwwwww wove true wove
Let's get one thing clear here: I. Hate. OC. Shipping. With. Mane. Characters. But this seems good enough to give a good criticism to.
First, The constant use of caps is very distracting. I can tell they are screaming from the '!'. No need for OVER THE TOP CAPITALIZATION!
Secondly, the use of exclamation marks are also very distracting. One is fine.
Third and finally, who is Blue Skies? How did he get in Twilight's Library? Is he Twilight's friend? How did he met Twilight? Is he good at what he does or is this going to blow up in Pinkie's face? The list of questions just go on, and on, and on.
So overall, this isn't as bad as most stories go, I can see you're trying. But I don't expect to favorite this.
At Snapple Jack: Most of the questions on Blue Skies will be answered later on the fanfic. But yeah, he's Twilight's classmate from her school from fillyhood. Twi invited him when she heard about Pinkie's problem. That's a little on the answers that I couldn't find a way to explain through Pinkie's eye. I mean, how would she know? Thanks for reading anyways, even if you hate that kind of shipping.
1087356 Gotta love them!
ill say it AGAIN
wove true wove
that went better then I
thought it would
1099179 They were pretty occupied. And drunk RD.