You already know I loved this, and I still squee that you stole ideas from my fic. I mean... made subtle nods to my story... You're one of the most talented perverts out there buddy.
Hrmm... Alright, that brightened up my mood considerably (can't play Borderlands 2 yet because I'm not in the US, psh...). I was expecting more RariShy when I saw the update, but I'd say this was equally endearing. Good stuff. =3
Well this was lovely. Once again you brought the feels. How do you hold all those feels? And why do you make me feel them too? Now this really makes me want to see that Twi x Pinkie ship that got mentioned here. So much potential for physics breaking and sexy shenanigans there....
The character is on the ground. An attacker who is prone has a –4 penalty on melee attack rolls and cannot use a ranged weapon (except for a crossbow). A defender who is prone gains a +4 bonus to Armor Class against ranged attacks, but takes a –4 penalty to AC against melee attacks.
Standing up is a move-equivalent action that provokes an attack of opportunity.
1300151>>1301743 Some of the readers of Red have not read Green. Its not impossible to enjoy the chapters I put out in Red as one shots, I write them out with that idea in mind, but you do have a better idea of whats going if you follow Green. And yes V, Twinkie shows up many times in Green, with various little scenes interacting with Rarity and Fluttershy and two of their own interludes. Green also has more Appledash in it. It also features an interlude with the cmc which for obvious reasons will not have a Red version lol.
I damn you for putting out this chapter whilst I was sleeping because to be able to read this I had to:
finish sleeping till 5.00 AM, go to school at 6.30 (can't enjoy reading when sleepy), return from school at 2.00 PM, eat till 2.15, go to my grandparents for shortening some of my pants till 3.00 so that I now finally can start reading it
What is this magical power you have? As a general rule I ignore all pairings other than RariShy and Derpy/Doctor (what would that even be called? DerpyWhooves? DoctorDerpy? I 'unno), but then you write things like this and it just works so well. I don't know what it is you do, but you just make them so damn good. Thanks to you I'm beginning to like Twinike a lot, I still don't actively look for it, but I don't mind reading it when I stumble upon it now, and that is entirely your doing. Not sure if I'll ever do much more than ACCEPT Appledash, but dammit, I will read whatever you give me because its perfectly done no matter what pairing it is (other than FlutterMac, for some reason that pairing just throws me right off). You mix it just right so it sounds loving and intimate, and not like some sick bastard who just wants the greasy dirty sex scenes. And it was still just as perfect before it went this way
I know I've likely said this before, but you sir are brilliant
Oh, my, GOODNESS am I glad I took the red pill. Wow. Just wow. You were right, the clop scenes were romantically touching...and I am also very turned on by them. Very.
I can't really remember everything I've read right now, but this just might seriously be my favorite clop scene, like, ever.
1309002 Thank you, I really wanted the mature scenes to be moving for each couple. It's romance at it's most intimate moment after all. Twinkie still has theirs coming, but I am glad to see each couple's chapter so far be so well received.
Not sure why I waited a few days to read this chapter, but completely worth it. The scene where Twilight was explaining the wings was absolutely adorable.
I wasn't really a big fan of appledash, but after this, I think I'm starting to like it. Also, still waiting for the Twinkie interlude for this. It gonna be so awesome!!! /)(^3^)(\
An awesome Interlude Steel. Whit a good story I can withstand the clop part. You gave a good explanation on the fake wings, and maybe added it to my head cannon.
After going through Of Maids and Mistresses, I have found that as I said, whit a good story, I can withstand it having clop.
I really hope the upcoming chapters will be as good or better then the previous.
Don't make me disappointed.
Also, Applejack will not be happy on you when she finds out about this. And I thinks that for reading this, she will make me unable to walk for a whole week.
Nah, Ah ain't embarrassed. Ah ain't even mad. Ah just wanted to make sure he took that stuff out of the regular story. Some people get all hot and bothered when ya take romance that extra step and actually show somepony makin' love. Ah happen to think there ain't nothin' more natural and beautiful, but to each their own.
I thought it was just because you were one of those exhibit-
Dangit Dash I ask you to take me in the apple orchard one time and suddenly Ah got a fetish?
1348782 Well I will promise you this much, while I am delving into mature scenes, it will never be pointless to the story. And it will be presented in a way that is romantic for the couple.
Cutest couple in the fic? It's hard to beat Rarishy, but... Mmmmh.
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You had it right the first time. By far the cutest couple in the fic :D
1299116 WHY IS IT THAT EVERYTIME I GO TO AN APPLEDASH FIC, I SEE YOU?!
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DO YOU REALLY NEED TO ASK!
SO.
MUCH.
WIN.
1299202 Oh yes
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Because I am apparently the ultimate authority on Appledash or so I'm told!
I don't think I've ever commented on clop before. I feel so dirty, and I love it.
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This is true.
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Join usss! Come to the dark side~
You already know I loved this, and I still squee that you stole ideas from my fic. I mean... made subtle nods to my story...
You're one of the most talented perverts out there buddy.
1299533 I only steal - errr make subtle nods to the best possible sources.
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You flatter me and I am not worthy
Oh buck it fine, I totally am.
You definitely have a lot of D'AWs in here Well written, good pacing, sensual, and sweet
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Ain't nothing subtle about those nods, sir!
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Well yeah, for you maybe. He gave you the damn title!
Hrmm... Alright, that brightened up my mood considerably (can't play Borderlands 2 yet because I'm not in the US, psh...).
I was expecting more RariShy when I saw the update, but I'd say this was equally endearing. Good stuff. =3
Loved it! Pinkie and Twilight sitting in a tree...
Well this was lovely. Once again you brought the feels. How do you hold all those feels? And why do you make me feel them too? Now this really makes me want to see that Twi x Pinkie ship that got mentioned here. So much potential for physics breaking and sexy shenanigans there....
My reaction to the seeing a new update on this fic
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That was an awesome chapter! You have skill good sir
this bucking made my day
Love it! only one nitpick: "she was
proneon her back" ...prone means she was on her front, you're thinking supine. other than that, have a mustache!1301260 lol my D&D geek side rears its ugly head.
Prone
The character is on the ground. An attacker who is prone has a –4 penalty on melee attack rolls and cannot use a ranged weapon (except for a crossbow). A defender who is prone gains a +4 bonus to Armor Class against ranged attacks, but takes a –4 penalty to AC against melee attacks.
Standing up is a move-equivalent action that provokes an attack of opportunity.
Changed it to flat.
1301297 heh. I really should've tried D&D when I was younger...
1299443 Wait... Do you have to be invited to be on the dark side? Or can you just jump right in? Cause I'm pretty sure that's what I did...
Great chapter. Very realistic (or so I think) of an RD freakout. Clop was good too.
Ya know, yer one of the few that writes clop scenes and they come out with the right amount of emotion and sauciness. As RD would say, awesome.
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didn't you read the rest of Green ?
@ Steel Resolve:
nice work again !
1300151>>1301743 Some of the readers of Red have not read Green. Its not impossible to enjoy the chapters I put out in Red as one shots, I write them out with that idea in mind, but you do have a better idea of whats going if you follow Green. And yes V, Twinkie shows up many times in Green, with various little scenes interacting with Rarity and Fluttershy and two of their own interludes. Green also has more Appledash in it. It also features an interlude with the cmc which for obvious reasons will not have a Red version lol.
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Jumping right in is also allowed! >_>
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Mine too
I damn you for putting out this chapter whilst I was sleeping because to be able to read this I had to:
finish sleeping till 5.00 AM, go to school at 6.30 (can't enjoy reading when sleepy), return from school at 2.00 PM, eat till 2.15, go to my grandparents for shortening some of my pants till 3.00 so that I now finally can start reading it
What is this magical power you have? As a general rule I ignore all pairings other than RariShy and Derpy/Doctor (what would that even be called? DerpyWhooves? DoctorDerpy? I 'unno), but then you write things like this and it just works so well. I don't know what it is you do, but you just make them so damn good.
Thanks to you I'm beginning to like Twinike a lot, I still don't actively look for it, but I don't mind reading it when I stumble upon it now, and that is entirely your doing. Not sure if I'll ever do much more than ACCEPT Appledash, but dammit, I will read whatever you give me because its perfectly done no matter what pairing it is (other than FlutterMac, for some reason that pairing just throws me right off). You mix it just right so it sounds loving and intimate, and not like some sick bastard who just wants the greasy dirty sex scenes. And it was still just as perfect before it went this way
I know I've likely said this before, but you sir are brilliant
Nice can't wait for the next chapter in red an green Keep being brilliant
P.S. Which Twinkie were you referencing I want to read it now
I will add a better comment later.
Their heart-to-heart regarding heroes was pretty moving, but it wasn't half as awesome as the lovemaking scene.
1302661 Twinkie is one of the featured couples in Green. The couple making appearances throughout the storyline and have two interludes of their own.
1302270 Sorry Mac, Shy is taken.
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Ah OK so it is in the normal story which i read I just thought it was another person's fic you were referencing I am no longer confused
1306860
Hooray!
Feisty, but she ain’t got nothing on a bull,
Farmlife
Oh, my, GOODNESS am I glad I took the red pill. Wow. Just wow.
You were right, the clop scenes were romantically touching...and I am also very turned on by them.
Very.
I can't really remember everything I've read right now, but this just might seriously be my favorite clop scene, like, ever.
1299436
Agreed. Although, I think I have commented before, just not very often.
1309002 Thank you, I really wanted the mature scenes to be moving for each couple. It's romance at it's most intimate moment after all. Twinkie still has theirs coming, but I am glad to see each couple's chapter so far be so well received.
I chose the right pill.
Not sure why I waited a few days to read this chapter, but completely worth it.
The scene where Twilight was explaining the wings was absolutely adorable.
Hey, 1299443, I think you meant 'cum' to the dark side.
I wasn't really a big fan of appledash, but after this, I think I'm starting to like it. Also, still waiting for the Twinkie interlude for this. It gonna be so awesome!!! /)(^3^)(\
An awesome Interlude Steel.
Whit a good story I can withstand the clop part.
You gave a good explanation on the fake wings, and maybe added it to my head cannon.
After going through Of Maids and Mistresses, I have found that as I said, whit a good story, I can withstand it having clop.
I really hope the upcoming chapters will be as good or better then the previous.
Don't make me disappointed.
Also, Applejack will not be happy on you when she finds out about this.
And I thinks that for reading this, she will make me unable to walk for a whole week.
1348706
Nah, Ah ain't embarrassed. Ah ain't even mad. Ah just wanted to make sure he took that stuff out of the regular story. Some people get all hot and bothered when ya take romance that extra step and actually show somepony makin' love. Ah happen to think there ain't nothin' more natural and beautiful, but to each their own.
I thought it was just because you were one of those exhibit-
Dangit Dash I ask you to take me in the apple orchard one time and suddenly Ah got a fetish?
I'm just saying... you finished really quick.
Just... shut yer mouth.
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I am not going to ask... I am glad you are not mad at me Applejack.
The main reason I take the red pill is to get the whole story. I don't like missing parts of one, it is annoying.
When you read a good story, you never wanna miss a single part of it. Even against ones better knowing.
1348782 Well I will promise you this much, while I am delving into mature scenes, it will never be pointless to the story. And it will be presented in a way that is romantic for the couple.
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