Seems like a good read, though it's going a little fast with the pacing and the characters bends to others a little easily. Other than those I'll follow along to see what happens next.
HOLY SMOKES!!! I know a few of my stories got featured on fimfiction before, but this is the first story that Fimfiction has deemed hot, I am simply amazed. Thank you everyone
Well this is new, Captain Celaeno, Raiding Slave traders, and the life of a pirate after the event from the movie. This is a fantastic start, a life of a pirate for this human and now what adventure awaits him with the capt.?
Hey we can all wait the longer we wait the better the feels will become when we are able to finally read this book so my Israel and nine take as long as u guys like we the according fans will wait
A few personal opinions. Why does he live near the sea and also happens to live near an expert martial artist? It's really unnecessary, seamen have their own fighting style called brute fucking strength. (personally this would make more sense than a martial artist) Also, this feels a lot like the guy from the Gilda fic, you just changed the backstory a bit. (Same personality, same way of acting) I just think this couldve been better. (Like seriously, Celaeno: "I've come to save you!" Character: "I dont even know who you are.")
10089165 Brute strength doesn't always work out. Plus, if he were like Garuda (Gilda's mate) he'd be a dick from the start but he's not, because I designed him to be similar to Mako Tsunami from Yu-Gi-Oh!
Where'd you find the cover art?
Let's hope Zoe Saldana doesn't have a cow about this story since she's the voice actress of Captain Celaeno.
I was wondering when a story would come.
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I hope the same thing if Emily Neves reads my Gine story on this site.
Dude I’m so proud of you this is going to be awesome excellent work!😉👍
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!
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Then Emily Blunt is gonna roll her eyes and tell her to get over it.
Meanwhile, Tara Strong will be chuckling in the background, muttering, “Ah, you sweet Summer child. . .”
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He didn’t I did. An artist called rainbowscreen made it.
great story keep it up u two
Ah, Miss Celaeno. Nice.
Congratz, ya got featured. 5/19/2019 for your reference.
Pirates of the Caribbean vibe intesifyingGood story going to give this a like. Still waiting for the anarchist guy, but going to kudos the story anyway
Me: OMG! Captain Celaeno is next!
Also me: When is Derpy gonna get her lover? She's so lonely.
Seems like a good read, though it's going a little fast with the pacing and the characters bends to others a little easily. Other than those I'll follow along to see what happens next.
Yup, good on pirates for life.
HOLY SMOKES!!! I know a few of my stories got featured on fimfiction before, but this is the first story that Fimfiction has deemed hot, I am simply amazed. Thank you everyone
Well done so far! You just earned yourself a bookshelf and a follow! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Bruh, you are making fantastic work.
Well this is new, Captain Celaeno, Raiding Slave traders, and the life of a pirate after the event from the movie.
This is a fantastic start, a life of a pirate for this human and now what adventure awaits him with the capt.?
Now I want to see what happen next
Good work you two
where's the next chapter?
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Be patient, my editor isn't always available, so it's gonna take some time to upload the next one.
Thx for chapter one
Hell to the yeaa this book is goons be the siza for the riza
Hey we can all wait the longer we wait the better the feels will become when we are able to finally read this book so my Israel and nine take as long as u guys like we the according fans will wait
Oops not mine I mean our fellow brony
Not according its adoring fans
Who's next after the lovely pirate captain?
your editor's taking a while, is there something going on?
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Aside from college and family, he has a job to go to.
Awesome work bro like always I love it
When will the next chapter be up?
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soon
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Awesome! I can't wait.
Yo Ho Yo Ho a pirate's life for me ☠
A few personal opinions. Why does he live near the sea and also happens to live near an expert martial artist? It's really unnecessary, seamen have their own fighting style called brute fucking strength. (personally this would make more sense than a martial artist) Also, this feels a lot like the guy from the Gilda fic, you just changed the backstory a bit. (Same personality, same way of acting) I just think this couldve been better. (Like seriously, Celaeno: "I've come to save you!" Character: "I dont even know who you are.")
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Brute strength doesn't always work out. Plus, if he were like Garuda (Gilda's mate) he'd be a dick from the start but he's not, because I designed him to be similar to Mako Tsunami from Yu-Gi-Oh!