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The Moon's Iron cross

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Comment posted by Centurion Pike-Wall deleted Aug 2nd, 2019

The Watcher of all

The Watcher of all #2 · Aug 1st, 2019 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Grammars okay, could be better, other than that it's pretty good.

(Needs more commas as well.)

The Watcher of all

The Watcher of all #3 · Aug 1st, 2019 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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Yes, you most likely just missed it is all.

After a while of getting used to my new body, I found my way out of the woods and found a dirt road. I found that I could use what I found to be a horn to levitate objects. My rifle was pointed down to the road but high enough that if a threat arises I could defend myself.

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