You don't need to tag your story with [displaced] in the title.

Tales of the Forge

Sounds much better than

[Displaced] Tales of the Forge

Doesn't it?

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it's just a warning so people don't get pissed with me for not warning them

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However, it does help others to find Displaced stories if they type in the word in the site's search engine.

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You could maybe put it in the description then, at the top in bold.
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Good point.

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do I tell you how to wright? nope I don't think so, shister off!

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Okay, geez.

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Don't respond negatively to criticism and suggestions, otherwise, you might discourage readers, attract trolls, or draw the attention of the more serious critics.

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loct'zet, sorry, I was in a bad mood. I haven't eaten in 12 hours. some idiot decided to trash the hydraulic lines on my forklift

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Ah, alrighty then. Sorry about that!

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sok, is ok

Cool to see a displaced about a different darksiders character. Definitely interested in this

Its great I’ve only recently got into the Darksiders fandom and this story looks great

Interessting I shall be watching this with great intrigue

keep up the good work

I'd say this is a seven out of ten so far, please continue.

More pls

He stepped on an I.E.D. and all he lost were two toes and an eye?!! Damn! That dude's got either one heck of a guardian angel or the Devil's luck. Also, he's really bad at business. A bag of stuff from a random stranger with no money for $1,895,250.5 plus tax? He done got himself get screwed harder then every man in history combined. And not in a good way.

But I still find this interesting. I'll give it a follow and see where this goes.

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he's not bad at business he just needed to get rid of his stock, he didn't need the money... silence gnarl!!

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NEVER! Evil has Standards. One of them is good business sense. if you can get two gold when you only paid one, Kill them and make it three!

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But seriously, if you've spent time, energy and resources, not to mention countless hours slaving over the anvil hammer in hand just to up and give all your time and effort away for practically nothing? That just doesn't make much sense at all.

I'm an amateur blacksmith and while I would make a few projects and give them away as gifts I would most certainly not just give away the stock he did on a whim. I'd have put to much care into making those and would want something for my troubles.

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huh your a amateur blacksmith and i'm an amateur gunsmith, but no normally he would not sell that low but that stuff was gathering dust, left overs from clients you did not pay, stuff like that.plus the stuff in the bag are going to be worth it

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This is a displaced story. I have no doubt the stuff in the bag will be worth it. Looking forward to seeing what goodies he did get.

more please

Love the idea, but needs a little more editing. Is this all self edited or do you have an editor?