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Hoku!!
Nice, love Hoku and hope he gets another promotion!
found a typo: "All officials disavow knowledge of any nuclear launch."
No enemy units detected? .......the calm before the storm.
I feel that the EFC meeting is not gonna go well at all.
I hope someones taking note of the reactions of the other members of the platoon, as those are more likely to do detrimental actions to everyone sooner or later?
Im more worried that the longer they go without contact, the more time being spent digging in, setting up ambushes and outright making the whole approach Iwo Jima class from a certain point.
I really hope Starlight has a fast detect and trigger shield or teleportation spell running depending on power draw. As for Hoku, all it takes is someone who doesnt like him to sarcastically salute in a sniper enviroment.
I wish I could leave a thumbs up for every new chapter. I'm hooked!
Lieutenant needs to be spelled out, as well as other ranks unless they are attached to a name.
PFC Hoku, for example is good.
Private First Class should be spelled out otherwise.
As a military veteran, I just wanted to point that out to you. Great story, loving every chapter. :)
some how i see Hoku moving up a bit more.