9219628 while i commend you for your dedication take you time or you can burn your self out and not want to continue the story also check the displaced community on here for help with anything you might need its one way that your character can evolve along with your story thats how i got help with my own story even tho i still suck at grammer
You might want to include a message about cross-overs into your story description, that way people won't bother you about it if you're not readdy for said cross-over.
9220476 I will open up my story for crossovers in the future. But as of this moment I’m more trying to get the main premise set up and introduce characters. Give me like one or two more chapters. But thank you for the reminder :)
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while i commend you for your dedication take you time or you can burn your self out and not want to continue the story also check the displaced community on here for help with anything you might need its one way that your character can evolve along with your story thats how i got help with my own story even tho i still suck at grammer
Lighting walked into one, if i was Oz, i would have said "As long as you are on top you can put me down all you want" XD
intense chapter keep it up
You might want to include a message about cross-overs into your story description, that way people won't bother you about it if you're not readdy for said cross-over.
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Dang it why didn’t I think of that.
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I will open up my story for crossovers in the future. But as of this moment I’m more trying to get the main premise set up and introduce characters. Give me like one or two more chapters. But thank you for the reminder :)
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Good choice. Character growth, world building, and the story's plot comes first.
think you mean figuring not... fingering
seemed more built, remove the first "to".
entertained?
"Trial", though that can be blamed on auto correct.
isn't it "Clever", though this could be an adaptation to fit your world.
head down the stairs?
stature not statcher, English has many a stupid spelled word.
hetero-chromatic gaze maybe?
Take a bit more time to choose your words and check for spelling and you'll have yourself a decent story.