Displaced in My Little Mage
9231918You don't know the half of it
Wait a minute is it Indigo or Lightning that's playing against Shining armor? Because in the beginning match it was Indigo but near the end it says Lightning.
9236376Alright fixed chapter 6 is now up hope you enjoy it
my lantirn off.
lantern
Heart Warmings
Pretty sure it was Hearths Warming but it's your story and as far as spin-offs go pretty good.
I’m gererizing here because
summarizing?
It made my head very hurty to look at for more than any given length of time.
this is internal dialog but I would reword it. It made my head hurt to look at it for an extended period of time.
Thought you weren’t as good as you were
Though if you weren't as good
Shining said as he to sat at the
as he too
teacher a run for mouny with that overacting
a run for her money with how they overreact.
complaining about complaining about
You know what need to be done.
chores, mouny, favors,
money
So usually agreement then
usual
learn to stand for themselves
stand up for
“You betting that?” Lightning questioned
when did lightning get there, thought it was Indigo.
you nearly need to call
you need only call?
To be Continued...
9231918
You don't know the half of it
Wait a minute is it Indigo or Lightning that's playing against Shining armor? Because in the beginning match it was Indigo but near the end it says Lightning.
9236376
Alright fixed chapter 6 is now up hope you enjoy it
lantern
Pretty sure it was Hearths Warming but it's your story and as far as spin-offs go pretty good.
summarizing?
this is internal dialog but I would reword it. It made my head hurt to look at it for an extended period of time.
Though if you weren't as good
as he too
a run for her money with how they overreact.
You know what need to be done.
money
usual
stand up for
when did lightning get there, thought it was Indigo.
you need only call?
To be Continued...