Stella continued on not seeming to need any further producing
I don't think "producing" is the word you wanted here maybe provoking or a word of similar meaning.
would be a hypocrite to day I never want revenge.
"say" not "day"
There right there is why it’s not worth it.
replace the first "there" with "that"
Turning I saw Stella quickly fall asleep so now with an actual moment to myself that doesn’t have me laid out died it is time to go over things with my helper.
"almost dead" instead of "died"
Hopefully you lay off the crossovers for a bit, from what I saw I really don't have an interest in their stories. I'm here for YOURS and throwing other ideas in can detract from what you're trying to say.
9346234 Yeah I’m done with crossovers for awhile. Once again thanks for the corrections in case you haven’t noticed I have trouble tell which witch is which.
"tell" needs to be "until" or "till"
"real one"
I don't think "producing" is the word you wanted here maybe provoking or a word of similar meaning.
"say" not "day"
replace the first "there" with "that"
"almost dead" instead of "died"
Hopefully you lay off the crossovers for a bit, from what I saw I really don't have an interest in their stories. I'm here for YOURS and throwing other ideas in can detract from what you're trying to say.
9346234
Yeah I’m done with crossovers for awhile. Once again thanks for the corrections in case you haven’t noticed I have trouble tell which witch is which.
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If you want help just ask, I can do minor error checking for you. Might help you out more than you think.
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Thanks for the offer I might take you up on the offer. Just feel free to say to no at any point. Might take this to PM if that is okay.