Spike stays after class to discuss his schoolwork with his teacher Ms. Belle. She comes up with an unusual and sexy incentive system to reward good homework habits
This is a great story really. I SOOOO wish every clop/lemon/erotic writer I work with would read this. SOOOO many write the same way Spike did and it drives me crazy. That isn't sexy, that isn't romantic, that isn't intimate. That is a guy's power fantasy and doesn't give a shit about the female and their perspective. That is like how they ALWAYS write how the female is just 'loving it' or it is mind blowing and the guy is a sex god. Please. I get the fiction in fan'fiction' but to me it just comes off as sad lol. This feel like we will see a much more real interactions of not just intimacy but of relationship in general with Rarity teaching Spike on how to REALLY treat a woman like she is more than just a hole to stick your junk into.
I never expected this story to be updated, so this is a very pleasant suprise indeed. Also, I'm really liking the way his relationship is panning out between spike and rarity, keep up the good work mate
“You desire me, Spike. I am willing to make those desires a reality for you. But if you want to have me, you are going to have to earn me.” She gave a small chuckle. “Think of it as a quest to win your lady fair, sir knight.”
Gotta admit, since reading this second chapter, this fic’s been high on my list of fics I’d love to see updated. I love both Spike’s and Rarity’s characterizations.
Is chapter three on your schedule, or do you just plan to get to it whenever the mood or inspiration hits? (Don’t mean to sound pushy or anything, I’m really just curious.)
It's back :D
I love this story so far and I can't wait for more.
This is the gooooood kind of delayed gratification erotic/clop stories I like to read about.
This is the sexiest story that doesn't have any sex in it.
This is a great story really. I SOOOO wish every clop/lemon/erotic writer I work with would read this. SOOOO many write the same way Spike did and it drives me crazy. That isn't sexy, that isn't romantic, that isn't intimate. That is a guy's power fantasy and doesn't give a shit about the female and their perspective. That is like how they ALWAYS write how the female is just 'loving it' or it is mind blowing and the guy is a sex god. Please. I get the fiction in fan'fiction' but to me it just comes off as sad lol. This feel like we will see a much more real interactions of not just intimacy but of relationship in general with Rarity teaching Spike on how to REALLY treat a woman like she is more than just a hole to stick your junk into.
I never expected this story to be updated, so this is a very pleasant suprise indeed.
Also, I'm really liking the way his relationship is panning out between spike and rarity, keep up the good work mate
A pleasant surprise and very well done at that, you certainly have a talent for this. I look forward to the next chapter.
Also, a editorial note: "He tightened his hands on his hips," should be, 'He tightened his hands on her hips.'
Ironic that Wednesday is hump day.
Gotta admit, since reading this second chapter, this fic’s been high on my list of fics I’d love to see updated. I love both Spike’s and Rarity’s characterizations.
Is chapter three on your schedule, or do you just plan to get to it whenever the mood or inspiration hits? (Don’t mean to sound pushy or anything, I’m really just curious.)
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Yes.
I should draw something based on this one...
I love it!
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If you do, let me know, I'd love to see it :D