• Published 29th Jul 2018
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The Hunted Sun - Firefoxino



Celestia finds herself in a strange place with a creature that offers her only death. Can she run fast enough? Or will she succumb to the maws of the hunter?

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Comments ( 16 )

If I’m correct this is either from Norse mythology:
The sun is a chariot running from a wolf.
Or it’s a reference to a thing called “the wolf and lamb” with I think is a anime,manga or comic.
Either way it’s a work of art!

Not bad, there is not enough GOOD league of legends on this site. Lore wise kindred is among my favorites.

the concept was AMAZING.
It needs better editing though.
there were way too many run on sentences, and your word choice was stale at the end.

I would love to see this fixed up and expanded a bit.

9077113
It's from kindrend of league of legends, the lamb and wolf I mean. The picture is from Norse mythology I don't know all details though...

9077115
I'm glad you liked it:twilightsmile:

9077817
It was my first attempt :twilightblush: maybe in the future when I have some more practice I can return here and write it again and see what changes

Not bad. Needs an editor, sure, but you did a fine job with the intensity that Kindred's lore demands.

Not one...
...without the other.

Good story.
Kindred is my favorite.

Celestia might be ever-lasting but not truly immortal. She should learn to accept lambs offer.

Discord is the only one who doesn't has to fear lamb or wolf since Only he can not be harmed.

Ps. About that assassination...
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/354465/the-most-successful-assassination-of-princess-celestia UHM?

10983210
Hahahaha it would surely justify why celly didn't want to move on at all, imagine the gravings on the tombstone, unacceptable XD

10983210
ps OH OH OH this reminds me of... (so much about tombstones XD)

and we just got started!! :P


Press HERE to continue!
(there are quite a few dealing with her kidnapping and death, IF a tincy bit less seriously! Hope you enjoy em as much as i did)

... would Fluttershy be able to charm the wolf Oo?

10985467
Why would wolf be charmed by something that is already his? After all he can take all things, eventually.

10986226
Perhaps a Draconecus gets in the way??

10986406
Even chaos is not safe from the end eventually, every tale has a common theme, they end.

10986441
Wasn't chaos who started it all?
Big bang..

I totally think they could ha e a double date.
This is fimfiction after all. One day off won't kill anyone 🐱

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