have fun with the child of destiny Blueblood

awesome storie

*<>* when is he going to go get his car or did he just forget about it after feeling up the locals ?...

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Just for your FYI. His car is still in the human world. He got transported while inside Walmart.

Yaass, a good story!!! I love it

Ok I see a major herd thing going on and I see luna and celestia r apart of it. Fluttershy to. Or is it just me?

Man that was some good teasing to both them and the readers for a second there I thought I was going to get to read some action between him and Twilight good job keep it up and hopefully we will actually get to see some action

Pretty decent story, only real complaint is of how quickly his relationship is progressing with everyone.

This just keeps getting better and better each chapter,I can't wait to see more.

Good chapter, nice bath scenes.

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It's a fictional story. *rolls eyes*

well i came here for the plot(story) but i got some Plot(secret) but other than that little tidbit great story so far i hope to see more soon

Moar?

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*pats your head* patience my friend, patience. I plan to bring out a chapter a month until it's finished. Thanks for the compliments.

oh no, why do I get the feeling faust was acting alongside of the tree like the gods of this world here? Sorry if I repeat myself, but I dislike it if they have a guide function in the story and if "she, Celestia or Luna" are the reason they are in the world.

edit: also is this really a harem story? I wish I did something else with my time. i mean okay the first two chatpers looked bad, but of course that meant something like this was supposed to happen. Well you never know it until you see it. I just wish there was a harem tag for the stories.

“Who’s there? Answer me or I’ll vaporize you,” she said as I could see her horn glowing while standing on the bed and looking around her room..

Molestia would would say otherwise ~

Now in my human form I looked down to Rarity with a smirk clasping my hands behind me. Out of the corner of my eye both Pinkie and AJ handed over some bits to Rainbow. And Rarity’s mind shut down again as she just stared at me. I chuckled and went over to the rack and started to dress into the medieval slacks and chemise shirt leaving the front untied. The shirt was white while the slacks were black. I suppose it was for the classic tall dark and handsome look that she was going for. When done the shirt was tucked into my pants which also tied in front and left the shoes off for now. My eyes was on the girls the whole time while getting dressed. Rainbow whistled at me and threw a couple of bits toward me. Fluttershy was blushing hard hiding behind her mane. Twilight and Rarity’s mind was blown as they just watched. Pinkie was just staring at me with a soft smile with her eyes roaming all over me, and for the first time it sent a chill up and down my spine for some reason.

Pinkie wants some daddy~

“He looks positively delicious,” Pinkie said with her tone having a very lustful edge to it sending another chill up and down my spine. Something about her and the possibilities just got me a little nervous.

Some of daddy's cream. Now~

Hey Mr. Wild, I noticed during the bath scenes, I don't know if it was intensional or not but on multiple occasions you swapped between Celestia's and Luna's name when it should have been the other. Just to let you know.

Next was soaping her down everywhere. I wet her down, her head, neck and shoulders, mane, back, wings,

I'd like to mention that's something you definitely don't want to do with actual feathered wings. Well, at least here on Earth. Pony biology is likely different. Feathers are coated in special oil produced by special glands and it acts as protective layer. So, soap is quite detrimental for them and only used to clean a bird when it got into something hard to remove without soap.

The privacy curtain for the bed was hinged at the top where the curve of the bead met at a single point.

One of the “bed” entries is Bead, nothing major just a lot of bed descriptions and it got overlooked.

Luna just scoffed at me, “I think not for we normally don’t wear close anyway.”

Clothes, they sound similar but are different words.

Celestia just blanched at her sister while I looked at her with an annoyed expression, “Hey I refused to be pimped out.”

refuse, refused is passed tense.

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Thanks for pointing those out. I have corrected them. Sometimes what my mind is thinking and what my hands type are two different things. Grammarly can only go so far on free and I can't afford the premium yet. And no matter how much I re-read my stories I still miss things.