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Evil, Celestia, just evil
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that is why we call her trollestia
Trollestia strikes again!
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No.
Now, that’s why we call her Trollestia!
Why do I notice this typo everywhere now? That's a third story I see with it. Shuddered. With double D.
How do they have that stallion's DNA samples from thousands years ago? Was Equestrian medicine and science already that advance?
I like Celestia court better than American ones. Almost everything she said no to would have gotten a yes here.
There's quite a bit of sexual assault in this story and it's all kinda brushed off. It also seems like Luna is ignoring a couple of red flags when it comes to Emmit, once again the fact that he essentially molested her in her bathroom as well as her sister.
The story is fairly well written but it kinda turns me away by essentially stating "I'm the hero, anything I do is cool" when Emmit is doing all this sus shit and acting like a grade A creep.
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I thank you for the compliment that my story is fairly well written. My writing style and being a better writer is something I'm working on. As for the incident you mentioned, the way I have written the character and what he does may be for a reason, or for some reason in the story. I also know that no matter what I write I can never hope to get everyone to like it. That's impossible. As is evident by the 58 dislikes. However, in my defense I do have 531 likes to the story so far. So if you don't like the story or get turned off by it, well that's ok. I say thanks for reading what you want and have a good day.
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