Looks like we're witnessing the birth of another talented artist

Pretty good start. Culd ahve been a little longer but good start. I'll keep an eye on this.

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Its the prologue. But yea, it could have been a lil longer. But im glad i got it done at least

8899821
Its a good first step

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Thanks

I thought Sunset Shimmer's twin brother was Sunburst.
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Thats never been canonically proven

Ah, I remember high school.

Lunch was always overpriced and tasted like crap, forcing me to go to McDonald's up a block.

Drinking Strawberry milk automatically made you gay in everyone's' eyes because it's in a pink carton.

find a used condom pretty much everywhere.

counselors and teachers were more community aware, not thinking about the ones outside of it.

Pretty much flunked 10th grade, but leveled up for reasons.

Tests became my best friends. Fuck learning how to balance a checkbook

Yeah, public school was the shit.

I feel like you don’t know what “Second Person” means.

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Its not gonna be perfect, ok? If you dont like it, you can always go read something else. Just saying

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My comment had nothing to do with the quality of your story, nor do I care about the quality of your story.

What I do care about is the improper tagging of your story. It's tagged as having a 2nd person POV. You're story is in 3rd person POV. Hence, my comment.

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I apologize if i sounded rude. The tag was removed

Is Lightsaber a jedi or sith?

8901553
This isnt a Star Wars crossover. His name is Lightsaber cause that's the name I chose for him

8901558
I know, I just had to make the joke.

Make more happen. :)

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I assure you, im trying to get Chapter I done as fast as i can

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impregnation

that better lead some where other then oh this is a thing lets never bring it up again

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It wont happen at first, but i guarantee it will happen

8906000
its a bit of a tick when stories don't follow up on creating life

8906012
You dont have to read it ya know. I dont mean to be rude, im just saying

That's weird. This says it got updated but I'm still seeing only one chapter.

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Yea. I accidentally published Chapter I when i didnt mean to, as its not done yet, so i unpublished it. Thats probably why. My apologies

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Happens to the best of them. No woories.