Wait wait wait. What universe is this? Is it the Equestria Girls (Humans) or the Friendship is Magic (Ponies)? Because you stated that Spitfire had hands, and if that were true then Spike would be a dog, and they wouldn't be able to fly without airplanes, which is obviously not what they have been doing. No offence, but you need an editor.
So is spike now affected by the potion thanks to the soggy fry?
I hope this ends ok.
Intimate City!!!!
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Yes, but I don't think it really show's so expect so editing to the end of the chapter.
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ok, now it's easy to tell. better?
Wait wait wait. What universe is this? Is it the Equestria Girls (Humans) or the Friendship is Magic (Ponies)? Because you stated that Spitfire had hands, and if that were true then Spike would be a dog, and they wouldn't be able to fly without airplanes, which is obviously not what they have been doing. No offence, but you need an editor.
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Anthro. Look it up
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I actually forgot about that!
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all good
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I am serious about the editor though. I could help, if you wanted. It's a good, original plot that's written well but has mistakes in grammar.
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by all mean's.