“Dashie, you need to start packing your stuff!”
“I already have it all packed, Pinkie.”
“What about your Wonderbolt posters and figurines?”
The rainbow maned filly’s eyes flashed open in realization. From her usual perch on the beams of the orphanage’s ceiling rafters, she dropped down, flaring her wings out to slow her descent enough that she wouldn’t break her hooves upon landing. “I forgot.”
Applejack looked over at the scene, curiosity and questioning coloring her features. She looked over to Rarity, who was currently packing her many sewing items and cloths, and asked, “Ya wouldn’t think she’d forget about that stuff, would you?”
“AJ, I’ve come to expect many strange things from this family. Between Twilight’s obsession with books, Dash’s laziness, and Pinkie being Pinkie, it doesn’t surprise me anymore.” Rarity continued to pack her items, not paying attention to Rainbow Dash in a massive hurry, trying desperately to pack all of her Wonderbolt paraphernalia, or Pinkie Pie leaving the room. “Besides, have you seen a family of six orphans try to pack for being adopted by Princess Celestia herself?” She regarded her rustic earth pony sister with a satirical look.
AJ smirked at Rarity’s sarcasm, knowing it was simply banter between family. “I can’t say I have, Rarity. I suppose some things might be forgotten in the rush.”
The group continued with the packing, silence reigning over for a moment. Until, that is, Twilight opened the door, a list in purple magic. “Fluttershy’s packed, Pinkie’s packed, who else here is done packing?”
Rarity placed a final sewing needle in a case before closing it and softly zipping closed the pocket which held it. “I’m finished, Twilight.”
The lavender unicorn ticked a box on the sheet, before repeating, “Who else has finished?”
The earth pony in the room placed a small journal in her suitcase, answering, “I’m almost done, sugarcube! Just a few more things and I should be all good.”
“Alright then, AJ. Is Rainbow done?”
“No!” They all heard a scratchy, tomboyish voice from down the hall.
Twilight deadpanned. “She forgot her Wonderbolt stuff, didn’t she?”
Rarity chuckled. “You’d think that as much as she goes on and on about them, she would take better care of her things.”
Twilight returned the chuckle. “Tell that to the journal I got her for Hearth’s Warming.”
Applejack smiled, amused at her sisters’ antics. “We all have some bad habits.” She casually walked up to Twilight, throwing a hoof around her neck. “We keep each other in check, that’s what makes us family, ain’t it?”
“That and we have enough dirt on each other to bury us together eighteen times over,” Twilight casually added.
“That too,” Rarity observed.
Princess Celestia, with her small entourage of guards, numbering only two, approached Better Days Orphanage, established in Canterlot. Despite having known of it since the founding, she rarely took notice of the orphanage, as there were several factors that simply prevented her from having a closer look.
One such thing was that it was established near the edge of town, away from the palace. Not far enough that it would take an obscene amount of walking to arrive there, but far enough that one had to be rather high in the castle before they could see it. A simple building, it was brown with some tan stripes along its walls, but down near the foundation was a pure whitewash, having been painted on by many foals, fillies, and colts. Several designs were on there, from childish drawings of Sunny Days and the other foals, to simple scenery paintings and even some more professional looking pieces along it. The sheer amount of them made Celestia ponder how many children had been here.
Refocusing her objectives, the Princess of the Sun continued on her path, resolve coloring her features. She approached the door, noticing once again the paintings done by the many surely wonderful colts and fillies to have been here. The white alicorn knocked, ordering her guards to stay outside. Being the faithful, if pointless, guards they were, both took positions beside the door, forming a sort of restriction by presence. Restraining a few giggles, Celestia turned to the opening door and the bright smile of Sunny Days, caretaker of the orphanage.
“Hello Princess! The girls are almost ready.”
“I would hope so. How are they?”
“They’re doing good. A little… forlorn to be leaving, but they’re happy.” The mare waved the Princess inside, saying, “Come in, come in! I’m certain they’ll be happy to see you.”
The alicorn calmly walked inside, marvelling once again at the many portraits of colts and fillies decorating the walls. Both enjoyed some small talk, going along the halls until it opened into a large foyer. Inside of it were a small pile of packed bags and suitcases that evidently belonged to the six Celestia had come for, while said six were entertaining and saying their goodbyes to some of the other orphans that came to say farewell.
All except Twilight Sparkle. She sat near the pile of belongings, reading what appeared to be a journal, smiling and wiping away a few tears. Sunny Days walked over to her, sitting beside her and wrapping a hoof around the filly. In response, she turned and tightly gripped the mare, hugging her warmly. “Mother Sunny,” Said the tearing filly, “Thank you for everything. I promise I’ll never forget you.”
“And I won’t forget you either, Twilight. I’ll always have your smiling picture to come to and look at.” The lavender unicorn let go, holding onto the journal thoughtfully. Then without warning, pressed it into her caretaker’s hooves. “Twilight, I can’t take this,” Said Sunny. “I know what it is, it’s the diary you’ve kept ever since I got you it. You’ve written in it everyday, and it holds many precious memories. Memories you should keep.”
Twilight took the diary back when the mare offered it. Setting it on top of the pile of items from her sisters and herself, she turned back around and hugged the caretaker again. Voice shaking and tears flowing freely, she said, “I love you Mother Sunny.”
Sunny Days couldn’t hold back the tear that came with the phrase. And while she had prepared for a hard goodbye, what the mare didn’t prepare for was the rest of the sisters coming into the hug. In almost perfect unison, she could hear, “I love you Mother Sunny,” from each of the fillies. Unable to hold back the tears, she expanded the hug to wrap around each of them,
“I love each of you so, so much. I promise, if you ever need me again, just send me a letter. I’ll be there as quick as I can.”
The group hug lasted several heart-shattering moments, enough for Celestia to bear witness to a few of her own tears. Soon enough, it broke up, each of the mares wiping away their tears. Wordlessly, the fillies started getting their items, gearing up for their adoption. They each passed through to the other orphans, saying goodbyes, sharing hoof bumps, and giving hugs. Soon enough, Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie were lined up in front of Celestia, tears still gracing their eyes but smiles and hope reigning their expressions.
The Princess of the Sun had to fight back her own objections to separating them but had to say something, lest her own heart start to fight her. “I know that I may never measure up to what Mother Sunny has given you all,” She said, trying to maintain a stable voice, “But if you truly wish to stay here with her, I will not force any of you to come with me. I will do the best I can to provide for each of you, and I would love you like any mother would. It would hurt me more to see you sad than it would make me happy to call each of you my own children.”
The sisters looked to one another for a moment, looking for assurance, when they all had the same thought. Each of them nodded before putting down their bags, readying into a pouncing position, and jumping onto Princess Celestia, pinning her to the floor while being cuddled by six fillies. Sunny Days came up to her, smiling. “I think that should answer that.”
Princess Celestia, flanked by her newly adopted fillies and her two guards, led the way towards Canterlot Castle. Upon reaching the gates, the guards stationed in front bowed to her before opening the wrought iron fence. Nodding her head, the alicorn continued onwards to the castle, going at a slow enough so as for the children to marvel at the scenery. Many “Oohs!” and “Ahs!” were heard behind her, bringing yet another smile to her face.
Eventually, the group reached large double doors carved with many designs of previous battles and wars, enough to be a story in and of itself. Celestia stepped to the side of the group, allowing the six a fair chance to marvel at it before encasing the massive wooden constructions in her golden glow, slowly opening them for dramatic effect. “Welcome to Castle Canterlot.”
Beyond the door was a large entrance hall, opening up enough for even a pegasus to fly around comfortably. Many grand marble pillars lined the entrance and the walls, along with several large stained glass windows. Guards, their golden armor glinting in the light, were stationed throughout the room, some patrolling through the air, others walking behind the pillars. A golden-amber light flowed through the windows, creating an air of royalty and wealth.
Celestia stepped in front of the fillies, seeing the shared expression of a dropped jaw and wide eyes. She smirked lightly, asking, “Impressed? We have quite a bit more to go through, my little ponies.”
The tour of the castle went smoothly, the six adopted sisters seeing the throne room, the kitchens, the guard barracks, the gardens, and even the royal quarters.
“And this is my room,” Celestia said, opening the door. Inside was a sparsely decorated room, a desk sitting near the front with a large, queen size canopy bed at the back. A few bookshelves sat opposite of the desk, farther from the door. Many different sized tomes and scrolls alike were held in the shelves, some as dusty as if they came from ruins. Twilight gasped in joy at the sight of the bookshelves and immediately ran to them, grabbing three at random and opening them, flipping through the pages with both delicacy and speed.
“She’s a bit of a book enthusiast,” Rarity supplemented.
“Yep. You set a book in front of that filly, she’ll read it,” Applejack added.
Celestia hummed in thought for a moment. “That might be useful to know.”
Twilight kept flipping through them, an expression of utter glee and excitement upon her muzzle, until a golden capped hoof bumped her on the withers. Blushing, the lavender unicorn turned around, seeing the amused grin of her new foster mother. “Sorry…” The embarrassed filly said.
Celestia only smiled more. “Just wait until you see the royal library.”
“There’s a library here?!” The ecstatic filly asked, bouncing.
“Yes, and we’ll go there next. But first,” She said, motioning for the others to gather closely, “Let’s lay a few rules down. I’m not sure how Mother Sunny let you act, but here you will behave. Firstly,” The alicorn said, looking directly at Twilight, “You will ask for anything you wish to play with or look at. If I’m not around, look for a responsible grownup to ask. Secondly, before entering any room that is closed, knock first. You will respect the privacy of any and all who are here.”
“Yes ma’am,” The fillies said in unison.
“Thirdly,” Celestia said, wearing a warm smile, “As I'm certain you all know, I am the princess. While I will make as much time as possible for all you, I will be busy throughout the day. I promise, I won't neglect any of you, and please tell me if you feel like I am, but I am very busy during the day. Unless it's an emergency or if you feel unsafe, please don't come to me for every little thing. The staff can more than take care of anything small, like a snack or if you want to go somewhere.” The alicorn layed down, resting head height with the fillies. “I will be more than available everyday after court and before bed. I will try to spend as much time as I can with each of you.”
“Pinkie Promise?”
Celestia turned to the source of the noise, coming from a stern faced Pinkie Pie. “Excuse me?”
“If you’re really serious, Pinkie Promise!”
“I’m sorry, I don’t know what a Pinkie Promise is.”
Twilight supplemented the answer. “Pinkie made it to, as she says, ‘prove you’re really a friend.’”
“Yeah!” The pink mare added. “Nopony ever breaks a Pinkie Promise!”
Celestia rose from her lying position on the floor, sitting on her haunches and flicking her ear. “And how exactly does one make a ‘Pinkie Promise,’ Pinkie?”
Pinkie Pie rose up on her haunches exactly like her foster mother did, mimicking that actions as she said them. “Cross my heart,” She slashed over her barrel in the area where her heart would be, “Hope to fly,” She rapidly moved her hooves up and down to the sides of her, almost like wings, “Stick a cupcake in my eye!” From somewhere, she pulled out a cupcake and smashed it into her left eye, soon licking it up with an extraordinarily long tongue. “Mmm, blueberry!”
“Don’t worry, you don’t actually have to use a cupcake, just do the motions,” Rainbow Dash added.
Growing a smile, Celestia did as Pinkie had. “Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.” Instead of using a cupcake, she softly placed a hoof against a closed eye, removing it soon after.
Each of the girls smiled wide at the Pinkie Promise, happy to be able to trust their princessly mother.
“Now, shall we move to the library?”
“And here is where we will all gather each day for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.”
“Woah.”
“What she said.”
Each of the six fillies looked past the wide double door entrance, seeing a very ornate table and plush cushions set around it. A white table cloth with a pattern of the sun and moon lay atop it, set with flowers in a small vase on top of it. Large stained-glass windows sat near the entrance and at the back of the room, providing some well themed light, seeming like sunset at almost any time of day.
“Again, this is simply astounding!” Rarity said, transfixed by the decor. “Ooh, I can think of so many wonderful ideas to use in my designs!”
“Yeah, Rares, it’ll be named ‘Ode to lunch,’” Rainbow teasingly said.
“No, I will name it, ‘The Rainbow for lunch,’” Rarity snarkily returned.
“Pfft, yeah, like you’d eat me.”
The white unicorn airily waved a hoof around, saying, “No, you would be much too bitter for my tastes. Too gamey.”
“Speaking of gamey,” Celestia input, attempting to stop the inevitable fight before it again, “It is about time for dinner. What would each of you say to having a professionally cooked meal?”
Rainbow Dash was about to refuse when a loud rumbling come from her stomach. “Yeah, I’m pretty hungry. We haven’t eaten since lunch, right?” She asked sheepishly.
“Yeah,” Twilight agreed, “We all had a light lunch, since we couldn’t stay still and didn’t want to lose it on the way here.”
“Well,” The Princess said, grasping a small bell on a table near a door set in the back of the room, “Let’s eat.”
She shook the bell, to which a unicorn maid and an earth pony chef wearing stereotypical attire came out, the maid holding a small notebook and pen in her magic. “What would you like, Your Highness?” The chef asked. Celestia looked to the fillies at the question, smiling warmly, yet curiously.
Rainbow Dash flapped up to the chef, wearing the biggest grin she ever had. “I'll take a Double Triple Bossy Deluxe on a raft, four by four, animal-style, extra shingles with a shimmy and a squeeze, light axle grease, make it cry, burn it, and let it swim.”
Stunned silence floated around the room until Celestia said, smirking lightly, “Just so you all know, it is a very large rule here to not waste your food.” She turned towards the chef in his attire, still smirking. “Chef Ramsay, you have my express permission that if anypony does not finish their meal, you may lock the doors until such time as they have.”
Rainbow Dash dropped from her hovering, shyly saying, “I’ll just have a regular hayburger with no tomatoes please. And a Cola.”
Celestia, Mother of Equestria and Princess of the Sun, walked through the halls of Canterlot Castle, humming a small lullaby. Upon her back were six small fillies, cuddled up with one another, holding full tummies and sleeping very contently. Soon after dinner, despite most of them offering up refusals of growing weary, after a short ride from their adoptive mother’s back they had all fallen asleep.
With the hour’s change and the bell’s ringing from across town, Celestia decided it was finally time for the sisters to be put to bed. Fortunate that she had wandered close to it with the time growing ever later, the princess opened up six doors along a hallway, slowly, one-by-one, placing fillies into their beds, laying a blanket across them, and giving each a goodnight kiss. A couple of them were a little reluctant in their sleep to be parted with their new mom, holding onto her despite her own need of sleep. Instead of simply placing them into bed and more forcefully extricating herself, Celestia would hold the filly in question until they had let go, where with a warming spell upon their blankets, she would place them into bed and leave.
It was along this hall that she wandered deep into the night after some restless hours of sleep, gained fitfully and with worry. Worry for herself and how she would now cope with six little bundles of joy, worry for the six sisters and their relative safety along with their coping of coming to a new home, and finally worry for her own sister, and her thousand year stay on the moon.
Worrying herself into a small tizzy, Celestia stopped herself, breathing deeply and with control as she studied her surroundings. She saw six doors, along with some suspicious coloring to each of them. Ah, I’m in the fillies’ hallway. I suppose making sure they’re sleeping fine won’t do any harm, to them or I, She reasoned. With a tentative grip, assuring the door wouldn’t squeak, she opened it to reveal was supposed to be Twilight Sparkle’s room. Only, nopony was inside.
Finding it odd, but looking for a reasonable answer, she opened the next to find the same instance. One of her filly’s room, but with the filly in question gone. Opening the next, Celestia only saw the same. And the next. And the next.
Now in a truly alarmed worry, the princess practically slammed open the final door, Fluttershy’s room, to a most curious sight. A large pile of oddly shaped bumps and appendages was under the covers of the yellow pegasus’ bed, moving only slightly and irregularly at times while what sounded like snoring came from it. Moving quickly yet quietly, Celestia gently peeled off the blanket of the unknown monstrosity to reveal six multicolored fillies, all in a mish-mash pile of wings, horns, hooves, and cuddling.
Gasping loudly at the discovery, Celestia wrapped her own large, voluminous wings around the large pile, feeling her wings’ warmth be pulled into the almost hot pile of fillies, insulating them from the cold. Taking several moments to calm her frantic heart and slow her manic breathing, the motherly alicorn slowly realized what had happened. The girls had grew up together in the orphanage and were always so used to being close to one another. At some point in the night, they had each gotten up and walked to Fluttershy’s room where they all piled up for sleep.
Her heart rate and breathing much more steady, Celestia slowly lifted herself and her wings off of the fillies, looking at the large pile first with relief, then with adoration at the cute display. Until, that is, a few of them started to try taking the others’ tails and wrap them over their body, trying to stay warm. Feeling her heart melting at the sight, the princess decided to do away with the awkwardness and climbed into the bed with them, wrapping her long body and legs around the pile whilst simultaneously placing a large wing over the pile, effectively protecting them from the cold of the night.
Under her wing and against her left foreleg, Celestia felt one of the fillies squirming about, eventually managing to escape the fluffy and winged prison. Yawning widely, Fluttershy looked at her previous place, noticing the large white alicorn forming the barrier. With a wide, dopey smile on her face, and looking so tired, the butter pegasus crawled up to her adoptive mother’s face and hugged it tightly. A very shy, very quiet, and very tired voice met Celestia’s ears then, speaking with the most conviction she had heard from her.
Fluttershy said, “I love you, mommy.”
ADORABLE I'M GONNA DIANOF CUTENESS OVERLOAD
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I take it you enjoyed the chapter then?
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That one line at the end especially, SO AMAZING
Oh my heart, it can't handle so much adorableness! This was an excellent job of the girl's goodbye to Sunny & their 1st day in their new home! I can't wait for adorableness!
TOO MUCH ADORABLE CAN'T HANDLE HNNNGGGG SQUEEEE *dies*
Must...resist...urge...to squee... SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Resistance is futile.
*alarms going off all around in my head*
Megaphone speaker: warning, cuteness levels are hitting critcal! Cuteness over load will begin in mere moment. Estimate time 3 minuets! Only cure, read extremly dark and vilonet story, not enough time though.
Myself: oh shit! This is not good, all personel, be ready for immediate shut down. Stop all other jobs, and get ready to rebute my brain! This is not a drill i reapeat, this is not a drill.
*everyone scrabels to get ready but it is two late. Rainbows of death go around my brain and kill everything in sight. With that my brain stops working and i die do to cuteness over load*
Lol, seriously this was adorable.
I died, honest to god!
HNNNNNNNNNG!
This entire chapter was adorable.
Nice job with the dialog too - it looks better to my eyes with the commas instead of the periods.
On a more serious note, I wonder if there's a reason Celestia is so adamant about not wasting food. Maybe she and Luna struggled to put food on the table before they became the rulers of Equestria.
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I suppose it's just more of a moral thing really. Yeah, she can have as much food as she would ever wish for, but her needs, while important, don't overshadow that of Equestria as a whole. I can imagine that she would rather go hungry than see foals outside of the castle starve.
RIP Ailingstar: Died of Cuteness Overload
He died doing what he loved.
Well, it's too early to say anything for sure, but I'm liking what I'm seeing so far. This is an interesting concept, and you seem to be approaching it from the perspective of the early seasons when the show was still good an all the characters were relevant which is a major improvement over just about everything I see these days. There isn't a whole lot there yet so I'm not willing to pass judgement at this point, but you do have me curious to see where this goes.
To put this in context (since I like data), I just checked my favorites list to see how rare this actually is since it feels very rare at this point, and this the fourth story this year I have been genuinely curious to see develop. That said, only one other story was started this year with the other two being stories that started in 2014 and 2015, but they are ongoing and I only picked them up this year, so this is actually only the second new story this year that really got my attention.
That said, there is one tiny issue I noticed that I wanted to point out. It seems to me like you might not have put quite enough thought into what the change in setup would do to the girls. The example that made me notice this is AJ's accent which is very much a product of her upbringing (that is learned from family and community and is obviously not genetic) and thus shouldn't be present here, although that is minor enough and iconic enough that I can see why you would leave it. That said, it is interesting to note that this does not apply to Rarity because her accent (which I forget the name of) isn't actually something anyone uses (including the rest of her family) and is actually something some people deliberately learn to make themselves seem more fancy.
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I'm glad you like Sisters of Harmony! I can't truly say that this is the most interesting or the most original idea, since it seriously just amounts to the Mane 6 being adopted by Celestia. I'm much more surprised that no one thought to do it first, especially since it's so simple.
As for the accents, I think the tones and manners are just as much of a person as their personality is. Like Applejack, it's very hard to see her as Applejack without the distinct southern drawl. The same would go for Rarity, as while she may have grown up in an orphanage in this story, she's still largely the same pony with the same quirks. In this fic, I'm planning on keeping the Mane 6 virtually the same with some small changes here and there to more emphasize what growing up together did to them. You'll see more of that in the next couple chapters and especially the ending.
Thanks again for reading!
Can't find the danged meme but i have to say it.
You had my curiosity, now you got my attention.
Can't wait to see more.
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Yeah, that was my thinking on AJ as well. It just wouldn't feel right if she didn't have her accent. That said, the point does still stand as something you need to keep in mind, but it sounds like you are aware of it so hopefully things will go well.
Now to wait for those chapters to go live.
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Here's to hoping...
I must admit, I put of reading this for quite a while. Not just because I was wondering if more chapters would come it so I could get a better feel, but also because the concept seemed a little cheesy and a little far into AU for me. And indeed I almost quit for that exact reason at least once.
..... But holy frick that was cute
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Thanks for reading! Mind telling me what was so cheesy? I honestly haven't seen this style of AU done before, so that's why I am doing it. Also, what was your favorite part so far?
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This could just be a matter of the story having not developed yet, but as of right now there really isn't much conflict to speak of. Though I do understand that not all conflict is the same and not all stories necessarily need conflict, there was a point where it seemed like the story was just, "here's some happy ponies, and they stay happy".
What kept me going was what stories without real conflict need to have, good character interaction. You definitely found a new way to interpret the characters personalities into a new context, and that is what I liked about it. While I am thankful I stuck around to see that, there isn't much beyond the interesting premise to hook new readers. AU is tricky, some people don't like to be out of their comfort zone without good reason, and you are offroading pretty deep here.
From where you have gotten now I think you can keep going on the path you started and at very least keep the readers you already have. You have a style that is worth reading, so just take what I say as constructive criticism and keep the path you are on because my comment was meant as a compliment
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Thank you very much! Here's to hoping this story grows even more and gets better with time! Also, you didn't answer my second question. What's your favorite part of Sisters of Harmony so far?
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I think I kind of answered that in my first post but I suppose it needs context. Like I said, you created an interesting character dynamic, and then you paid off getting invested in that dynamic. Add to it the fact that we see it from the perspective of Celestia who is seeing it the same way we are, for the first time. Yeah, them all naturally coming together in the same bed, holy frick that's cute. And not necessary cheesy because you created characters we could believe would do that.
I just read your 2 chapters today and like it so far hope to read more soon.
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Thanks! As with the general theme with most here, was your favorite part the end of the chapter? Or did some other part grab your attention more? Thanks for reading!
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I kiled all of it it was cute and funny. But I got to ask is LM stand for Luna?
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Yes in fact, LM does stand for "Luna Moon." As for how, I'll leave that up to you. Also, sorry for taking so long to reply, my brother has been visiting recently.
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No worries and I do have some things come to mind when it comes to the how the main 6 came from Luna.
You could go by is if you are doing something similar as to what Polaris501 dose Heir of the Nightmare I stopped reading it because it got to a point that I didn't like where it was going. But still am a fan of Polaris501's other fanfic called In the Sun's Shadow which hasn't been updated in a long time compared to Heir of the Nightmare. But from what I can recall is that Luna gave birth to an alicorn Twilight and didn't tell Celestia about it. One day Luna tried Celestia but couldn't and when Luna went back to Twilight she finds Twilight was kidnaped by a group who is crazy about Celestia and said group tries to kill Twilight. Luna saves Twilight only to poison her with dark magic on that very night as she becomes Nightmare Moon. After Celestia sealed Nightmare Moon on the Moon Celestia finds Twilight dying and had no chose but to turn her into a unicorn to save Twilight's life only for her to go into a coma. Celestia puts Twilight in a cocoon that won't let her age and when Twilight wakes up a few years before Nightmare Moon comes back and Celestia gives her up to keep her safe.
You could have also mixed in the Chatterjoy fanfic Feather to Feather and Starlight Crusadir fanfic Twilight Sparkle: ORIGINS where Twilight is sent to the future.
There is also the fact that you could do what Stratocaster did with the fanfic called Starchildren where Nightmare Moon kidnaped Big Mac Shining Armor and Thunderlane and raised them as her own. All because Nightmare Moon finds out that the three have some type a link to the main 6.
Which if you got your idea's from them or similar fanfic's I got two idea's in my head on how you will go about it.
One Luna gave birth to all of them but before she became Nightmare Moon she sends them to the future for there safety and if they were alicorns themselves Luna did something to hid it in hopes that Celestia never finds out about them and never sees them. Which could be reviled when the main 6 get there cutie marks and Celestia freaks out and does a DNA test on them to find out that they are Luna's by blood.
Or Nightmare Moon finds out who they kidnap them and Luna for a moment gets back control and sends them back but can't send them home to there real families. And makes it look like they died on the Moon to throw Nightmare Moon off.
That is all I have as for the ideas as to how it could be, hope you have a good day.
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I mean... If that's what you want to believe, go ahead. This is going to be a loose thread at the end of the fic. I personally don't care how you think Luna got them, come up with some wild theories. I'll just be here, eating noodles and reading.
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Um... I just did I just used the spoiler blackout because I brought up other fanfic's and I don't know how people would feel about that...? Or were you jocking?
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I'm being entirely serious.
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Okay
Sorry for bugging you but do you know when the next chapter will be posted?
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Here you go.
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Oh...Thank you for letting me know.
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Well if that's the case than I expect the next chapter out tomorrow
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Maybe. Maybe not. Read the latest blog post (which was today!).
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So you lied to us
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I found this really sweet. I hope you write more!
update?