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NeoLuminara


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The thrill of a good mystery is something that anypony would want to read about, but what about living it. The mane 6 were all there when Twilight and Pinkie "solved" the confection capers. When things get started Everypony wants to learn how to solve the mysteries that appear around Ponyville.

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Congrats on first story post! :yay:

I like what I read so far. It could use a little editing here and there, nothing major! Just the same little mistakes I know I always make, and can never see in my own writing.

Oh, and excellent characterization on :pinkiehappy:
I look forward to seeing where your story goes!

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